Apps Directorate Review of draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05

2012-06-02 Thread Eliot Lear
Document: draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05 Title: Updated Specification of the IPv4 ID Field Reviewer: Eliot Lear Review Date: 2 June 2012 IETF Last Call Date: 31 May 2012 Summary: This draft is quite well written, and is *very* nearly ready for publication. This draft is well written,

Re: [Int-area] Apps Directorate Review of draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05

2012-06-02 Thread Joe Touch
Hi, Eliot, On Jun 2, 2012, at 6:00 AM, Eliot Lear wrote: Document: draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05 Title: Updated Specification of the IPv4 ID Field Reviewer: Eliot Lear Review Date: 2 June 2012 IETF Last Call Date: 31 May 2012 Summary: This draft is quite well written, and is

Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt (The Tao of IETF: A Novice's Guide to the Internet Engineering Task Force) to Informational RFC]

2012-06-02 Thread Joel jaeggli
On 5/31/12 02:05 , Klaas Wierenga wrote: On 5/31/12 10:58 AM, Stephen Farrell wrote: I'm with Brian and Yoav on this. I don't see a need to change here. And I do think we might lose something if we become too PC. If a bunch of non-native speakers did say yes, I found that made the document

Re: [Int-area] Apps Directorate Review of draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05

2012-06-02 Thread C. M. Heard
On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Joe Touch wrote: Hi, Eliot, On Jun 2, 2012, at 6:00 AM, Eliot Lear wrote: Document: draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05 Title: Updated Specification of the IPv4 ID Field Reviewer: Eliot Lear Review Date: 2 June 2012 IETF Last Call Date: 31 May 2012

Re: Last Call: draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05.txt (Updated Specification of the IPv4 ID Field) to Proposed Standard

2012-06-02 Thread C. M. Heard
On Sat, 2 Jun 2012, Masataka Ohta wrote: Existing routers, which was relying on ID uniqueness of atomic packets, are now broken when they fragment the atomic packets. Such routers were always broken. An atomic packet has DF=0 and any router fragmenting such a packet was and is non-compliant

Re: [Int-area] Apps Directorate Review of draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05

2012-06-02 Thread Glen Zorn
On Sat, 2012-06-02 at 21:21 -0700, C. M. Heard wrote: ... In Section 6.1: Datagram de-duplication can be accomplished using hash-based duplicate detection for cases where the ID field is absent. Under what circumstances would the ID field be absent? Replace

Re: [Int-area] Apps Directorate Review of draft-ietf-intarea-ipv4-id-update-05

2012-06-02 Thread C. M. Heard
On Sun, 3 Jun 2012, Glen Zorn wrote: On Sat, 2012-06-02 at 21:21 -0700, C. M. Heard wrote: ... In Section 6.1: Datagram de-duplication can be accomplished using hash-based duplicate detection for cases where the ID field is absent. Under what