Hi, Ben,
Thanks so much for your review! (and my appologies for the delay in my
response). PLease find my comments inline...
On 11/01/2011 04:55 PM, Ben Campbell wrote:
Minor issues:
-- section 3, paragraph after ISN formula: It is vital that F not be
computable…
If it's vital for
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