Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-22 Thread Russ Housley
Elwyn: Two points: Rereading things again, I have another suggestion; 4) Split the Goals of the Internet registry system out of the Introduction. The Intro starts out talking about the document, its goals, and what is in scope and out of scope of the document. Then transitions to

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-22 Thread Russ Housley
On Mar 20, 2013, at 6:04 PM, SM wrote: At 12:43 20-03-2013, Elwyn Davies wrote: This contains some woolly hand-waving weasel words at the end: I looked up the meaning of weasel words and found the following: words and phrases aimed at creating an impression that something specific

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-22 Thread SM
Hi Russ, At 08:43 22-03-2013, Russ Housley wrote: RFC 2050 contains rules that are superseded by RIR policies. That doesn't explain the label. :-) This document replaces RFC 2050. Since the publication of RFC 2050, the Internet Numbers Registry System has changed significantly. This

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-21 Thread SM
Hi John, At 20:38 20-03-2013, John Curran wrote: Excellent question; it's my belief that obsoleting RFC2050 would do that, but perhaps it would be best to make that point more Yes. specific in this document? It may be easier to add text which provides a (simple) explanation about why RFC

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread John Curran
On Mar 19, 2013, at 9:30 PM, David Farmer far...@umn.edu wrote: I wonder if it wouldn't be appropriate to at least provide some suggestions for how this is to be accomplished. Maybe request that future RFCs related to these technical and operational considerations include an applicability

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi, Russ. Two points: On Tue, 2013-03-19 at 22:30 -0500, David Farmer wrote: snip Rereading things again, I have another suggestion; 4) Split the Goals of the Internet registry system out of the Introduction. The Intro starts out talking about the document, its goals, and what is in

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread Arturo Servin
I interpret it as anybody. ISPs, cctlds, governments, gtlds, IETF, RIRs, ICANN, ISOC, you, me. /as On 3/20/13 4:43 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: This contains some woolly hand-waving weasel words at the end: Over the years, the Internet Numbers Registry System has developed

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread David Farmer
On 3/20/13 14:04 , John Curran wrote: On Mar 19, 2013, at 9:30 PM, David Farmer far...@umn.edu wrote: I wonder if it wouldn't be appropriate to at least provide some suggestions for how this is to be accomplished. Maybe request that future RFCs related to these technical and operational

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread David Farmer
Whops, that escaped. Sorry. Lets start over. On 3/20/13 15:51 , David Farmer wrote: On 3/20/13 14:04 , John Curran wrote: On Mar 19, 2013, at 9:30 PM, David Farmer far...@umn.edu wrote: I wonder if it wouldn't be appropriate to at least provide some suggestions for how this is to be

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread SM
At 12:43 20-03-2013, Elwyn Davies wrote: This contains some woolly hand-waving weasel words at the end: I looked up the meaning of weasel words and found the following: words and phrases aimed at creating an impression that something specific and meaningful has been said, when in fact

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread John Curran
On Mar 20, 2013, at 3:25 PM, David Farmer far...@umn.edu wrote: xxx is obligated to ... wasn't intended as a suggestions for text, but like I paraphrased the text from the draft above, and I intended it to paraphrase the the text that needs to be added. The text above quoted from the draft

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread John Curran
On Mar 20, 2013, at 4:04 PM, SM s...@resistor.net wrote: I might as well comment quickly about draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00. The draft is a good effort but it might need more work in my humble opinion. The intended status is Informational. Is there a reason for that? The RFC is not

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread SM
Hi John, This is an individual comment. At 16:38 20-03-2013, John Curran wrote: The RFC is not intended to establish anything new, only to recognize the existing agreements and practices of the IETF in this area. Ok. I'll defer to the learned individuals of the IETF in respect to the

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-20 Thread John Curran
On Mar 20, 2013, at 8:45 PM, SM s...@resistor.net wrote: Ok. I'll defer to the learned individuals of the IETF in respect to the intended status. It is my understanding that the document also aims to replace BCP 12. Excellent question; it's my belief that obsoleting RFC2050 would do that,

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-19 Thread Eliot Lear
While I appreciate the minimalist approach, can we please get one *phrase* each on what is being referenced, so that people might have some reason to actually read the reference: Internet Registries [ASOMOU] and documented in [ICANNv4], [ICANNv6], and [ICANNASN]. Also, I note that

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-19 Thread Russ Housley
David: 1) In Section 1, goal #2, Hierarchical Allocation, I believe a reference the definition in RFC 5226 - Section 4.1. Well-Known IANA Policy Definitions, should be considered. We could do so, but I do not believe that the few word in RFC 5226 on hierarchical allocation improve the

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-19 Thread David Farmer
On 3/19/13 14:48 , Russ Housley wrote: David: 1) In Section 1, goal #2, Hierarchical Allocation, I believe a reference the definition in RFC 5226 - Section 4.1. Well-Known IANA Policy Definitions, should be considered. We could do so, but I do not believe that the few word in RFC 5226 on

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-18 Thread Ole Jacobsen
I am wondering if the draft should mention that Local Internet Registries (LIRs) may sometimes take the form of National Internet Registries (NIRs) since this is now a reality in some places? The current text doesn't exclude such an arrangement, but given that this draft is an update to

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-18 Thread joel jaeggli
On 3/18/13 6:04 AM, Ole Jacobsen wrote: I am wondering if the draft should mention that Local Internet Registries (LIRs) may sometimes take the form of National Internet Registries (NIRs) since this is now a reality in some places? All of the NIRs I've encountered can be construed as LIRs under

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-18 Thread Roger Jørgensen
On Mon, Mar 18, 2013 at 5:20 PM, joel jaeggli joe...@bogus.com wrote: On 3/18/13 6:04 AM, Ole Jacobsen wrote: I am wondering if the draft should mention that Local Internet Registries (LIRs) may sometimes take the form of National Internet Registries (NIRs) since this is now a reality in some

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-18 Thread Arturo Servin
Policy Manual / v1.10 - 13/08/2012 1. Definitions http://www.lacnic.net/en/web/lacnic/manual-1 2. IPv4 Addresses http://www.lacnic.net/en/web/lacnic/manual-2 etc ... And it is not administration/control, it is also about service (language, timezones, etc.) /as

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-18 Thread David Farmer
1) In Section 1, goal #2, Hierarchical Allocation, I believe a reference the definition in RFC 5226 - Section 4.1. Well-Known IANA Policy Definitions, should be considered. 2) I also wonder if another appropriate goal would be explicitly defining the ASN and IP address registries using RFC

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-17 Thread Abdussalam Baryun
Hi Russ, I have four questions before following the request. Qs below; please answer, [rfc2050bis-00] The administrative structures of the Internet Numbers Registry System described in this document are largely the result of the interaction of operational practices, existing routing

Re: Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-17 Thread David Conrad
[cc to routing-discuss...@ietf.org moved to bcc try to keep discussion splay limited] Hi, Speaking for myself as one of the authors: On Mar 17, 2013, at 5:35 AM, Abdussalam Baryun abdussalambar...@gmail.com wrote: I have four questions before following the request. Qs below; please answer,

Please review draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt

2013-03-16 Thread Russ Housley
A new, I-D, draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt, has been posted. I am writing to ask for your review. Russ = = = = = = = = = = Filename:draft-housley-rfc2050bis-00.txt Title: The Internet Numbers Registry System Creation date: 2013-03-14 Group: Individual