Re: Language editing

2013-05-07 Thread ned+ietf
> On 08/05/2013 08:33, Ned Freed wrote: > >> On 08/05/2013 03:28, John C Klensin wrote: > >> ... > I'll also point out that this has diddley-squat to do with > formal verification processes. Again as Mark Anrdrews points > out, we deployed something with a restriction that > sub

Re: Language editing

2013-05-07 Thread Randy Presuhn
Hi - > From: "Brian E Carpenter" > To: "Ned Freed" > Cc: "John C Klensin" ; ; > > Sent: Tuesday, May 07, 2013 2:19 PM > Subject: Re: Language editing ... > You are correct if only considering the mail standards. I suspect > that a serious

Re: Language editing

2013-05-07 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 08/05/2013 08:33, Ned Freed wrote: >> On 08/05/2013 03:28, John C Klensin wrote: >> ... I'll also point out that this has diddley-squat to do with formal verification processes. Again as Mark Anrdrews points out, we deployed something with a restriction that subsequently turn

Re: Language editing

2013-05-07 Thread ned+ietf
> On 08/05/2013 03:28, John C Klensin wrote: > ... > >> I'll also point out that this has diddley-squat to do with > >> formal verification processes. Again as Mark Anrdrews points > >> out, we deployed something with a restriction that > >> subsequently turned out to be unnecessary, and now we're

Re: Language editing

2013-05-07 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 08/05/2013 03:28, John C Klensin wrote: ... >> I'll also point out that this has diddley-squat to do with >> formal verification processes. Again as Mark Anrdrews points >> out, we deployed something with a restriction that >> subsequently turned out to be unnecessary, and now we're stuck >> wit

Re: Language editing

2013-05-07 Thread John C Klensin
--On Tuesday, May 07, 2013 08:08 -0700 Ned Freed wrote: >> Maybe things have changed, but, if one actually believes the >> robustness principle, then, in the case Geoff cites, Exchange >> is simply non-conforming -- not because the spec prohibits >> rejecting on the basis of a fine distinction

Re: Language editing

2013-05-07 Thread ned+ietf
> Maybe things have changed, but, if one actually believes the > robustness principle, then, in the case Geoff cites, Exchange is > simply non-conforming -- not because the spec prohibits > rejecting on the basis of a fine distinction about IPv6 formats, > but because doing so is unnecessary, incon

Re: Language editing

2013-05-06 Thread ned+ietf
> Mark Andrews wrote: > > > > Apples mail client is broken [IPv6:2001:df9::4015:1430:8367:2073:5d0] > > is not legal according to both RFC 5321 and RFC 2821 which is all > > that applies here. >I was until today unaware how strong the feelings are on this > "one-or-more" vs. "two-or-more" iss

Re: Language editing

2013-05-06 Thread Mark Andrews
You missed the point RFC 5321 SMTP clients have to operate with RFC 2821 SMTP servers when sending address literal in the HELO/EHLO. Code doesn't magically get updated when the spec is updated. It takes years for changes to trickle through. The code has t

Re: Language editing

2013-05-06 Thread John Leslie
Mark Andrews wrote: > > Apples mail client is broken [IPv6:2001:df9::4015:1430:8367:2073:5d0] > is not legal according to both RFC 5321 and RFC 2821 which is all > that applies here. I was until today unaware how strong the feelings are on this "one-or-more" vs. "two-or-more" issue. I do not

Re: Language editing

2013-05-06 Thread Mark Andrews
In message <51881140.5070...@gmail.com>, Brian E Carpenter writes: > On 07/05/2013 02:10, l.w...@surrey.ac.uk wrote: > > http://labs.apnic.net/blabs/?p=309 > > > > an excellent detective story on badly-written, poorly edited, standards > > track RFCs leading to interop pro > blems. Enjoy. > > I

Re: Language editing

2013-05-06 Thread John C Klensin
--On Tuesday, May 07, 2013 08:23 +1200 Brian E Carpenter wrote: > On 07/05/2013 02:10, l.w...@surrey.ac.uk wrote: >> http://labs.apnic.net/blabs/?p=309 >> >> an excellent detective story on badly-written, poorly edited, >> standards track RFCs leading to interop problems. Enjoy. > > I don't t

Re: Language editing

2013-05-06 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 07/05/2013 02:10, l.w...@surrey.ac.uk wrote: > http://labs.apnic.net/blabs/?p=309 > > an excellent detective story on badly-written, poorly edited, standards track > RFCs leading to interop problems. Enjoy. I don't that is quite right. The problem in this case is not to do with linguistic qua

Re: Language editing

2013-05-06 Thread Dale R. Worley
> From: Brian E Carpenter > > On 04/05/2013 09:22, Yaron Sheffer wrote: > > GEN-ART is a good example, but actual document editing is much more work > > and arguably, less rewarding than a review. So I think this can only > > succeed with professional (=paid) editors. > > I think I disagree, if

RE: Language editing

2013-05-06 Thread l.wood
discussion. From: ietf-boun...@ietf.org [ietf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of John C Klensin [john-i...@jck.com] Sent: 05 May 2013 19:32 To: Brian E Carpenter; Yaron Sheffer Cc: ietf@ietf.org Subject: Re: Language editing --On Saturday, May 04, 2013 10:04

Re: Language editing

2013-05-05 Thread John C Klensin
--On Saturday, May 04, 2013 10:04 +1200 Brian E Carpenter wrote: > On 04/05/2013 09:22, Yaron Sheffer wrote: >> GEN-ART is a good example, but actual document editing is >> much more work and arguably, less rewarding than a review. So >> I think this can only succeed with professional (=paid) >

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread joel jaeggli
On 5/3/13 3:04 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: On 04/05/2013 09:22, Yaron Sheffer wrote: GEN-ART is a good example, but actual document editing is much more work and arguably, less rewarding than a review. So I think this can only succeed with professional (=paid) editors. I think I disagree, if w

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 04/05/2013 09:22, Yaron Sheffer wrote: > GEN-ART is a good example, but actual document editing is much more work > and arguably, less rewarding than a review. So I think this can only > succeed with professional (=paid) editors. I think I disagree, if we can find the knack of effective crowd-s

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread Doug Barton
On 05/03/2013 02:22 PM, Yaron Sheffer wrote: GEN-ART is a good example, but actual document editing is much more work and arguably, less rewarding than a review. So I think this can only succeed with professional (=paid) editors. I'm not sure that's the right conclusion to draw. In the past I

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread Yaron Sheffer
GEN-ART is a good example, but actual document editing is much more work and arguably, less rewarding than a review. So I think this can only succeed with professional (=paid) editors. Thanks, Yaron On 05/02/2013 02:40 PM, Yaron Sheffer wrote: I suggest that we budget for a number o

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread Dale R. Worley
> From: Scott Brim > > My experience is that unless the editors have some background in > protocols, this takes a surprising amount of effort, explaining it to > them and catching _their_ mistaken assumptions (which can be subtle). I'm told that the CCITT maintains a staff of technical writers.

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread Ralph Droms
On May 2, 2013, at 9:47 PM 5/2/13, Dave Crocker wrote: > On 5/2/2013 4:13 PM, Peter Saint-Andre wrote: >> Instead of imposing even more work on the RFC Editor team, I suggest >> that you find someone in the WG, in your company, in the IETF >> community (etc.) to help with the language issues. I

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread t . p .
Original Message - From: "TZI" To: "t.p." Cc: "Peter Saint-Andre" ; "Marc Petit-Huguenin" ; "Yaron Sheffer" ; "ietf" Sent: Friday, May 03, 2013 9:37 AM Subject: Re: Language editing > We really do need a tool, the l

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread Scott Brim
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA1 On 05/02/2013 02:40 PM, Yaron Sheffer wrote: > I suggest that we budget for a number of WG drafts per year (say, > 20 IETF-wide) to go through professional, paid-for heavy-duty > editing My experience is that unless the editors have some background in

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread Ted Lemon
On May 3, 2013, at 4:24 AM, t.p. wrote: > We really do need a tool, the like of which I was using 40 years ago > when writing code, that allows patches to be applied independently and > temporarily to see what it then looks like and if agreed that it looks > good, incorporating them permanently in

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread TZI
> We really do need a tool, the like of which I was using 40 years ago > when writing code, that allows patches to be applied independently that's what pull requests (or gerrit) are about. > and > temporarily to see what it then looks like and if agreed that it looks > good, incorporating them pe

Re: Language editing

2013-05-03 Thread t . p .
- Original Message - From: "Peter Saint-Andre" To: "Marc Petit-Huguenin" Cc: "Yaron Sheffer" ; Sent: Friday, May 03, 2013 12:13 AM > > On 5/2/13 4:03 PM, Marc Petit-Huguenin wrote: > > On 05/02/2013 02:40 PM, Yaron Sheffer wrote: > > An alternative would be to have the RFC-editor doing c

Re: Language editing

2013-05-02 Thread Marc Petit-Huguenin
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA256 On 05/02/2013 06:41 PM, Carsten Bormann wrote: > On May 3, 2013, at 01:13, Peter Saint-Andre wrote: > >> source control > > I don't think it has been emphasized enough how important that is from a > document quality perspective. > > More importan

Re: Language editing

2013-05-02 Thread Ted Lemon
On May 2, 2013, at 9:47 PM, Dave Crocker wrote: > If the community does not have enough interest in the work to write it well, > it has bigger problems that won't be remedied by more RFC Editor effort... Also worth considering is that if a document is hard to read, it is hard to review, and hen

Re: Language editing

2013-05-02 Thread Ted Lemon
On May 2, 2013, at 9:41 PM, Carsten Bormann wrote: > People who aren't aware of it should look at the httpbis github experiment. > The pull request is a powerful model of WG collaboration. Several authors in the dhc working group have been doing the same thing, to good effect.

Re: Language editing

2013-05-02 Thread Dave Crocker
On 5/2/2013 4:13 PM, Peter Saint-Andre wrote: Instead of imposing even more work on the RFC Editor team, I suggest that you find someone in the WG, in your company, in the IETF community (etc.) to help with the language issues. I did this recently with a document in one of the WGs where I'm activ

Re: Language editing

2013-05-02 Thread Carsten Bormann
On May 3, 2013, at 01:13, Peter Saint-Andre wrote: > source control I don't think it has been emphasized enough how important that is from a document quality perspective. More importantly for this discussion, it also somewhat mitigates the document editor as a choking point. People who aren'

Re: Language editing

2013-05-02 Thread Peter Saint-Andre
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA1 On 5/2/13 4:03 PM, Marc Petit-Huguenin wrote: > On 05/02/2013 02:40 PM, Yaron Sheffer wrote: >> As a non-native English speaker, but a language pedant >> nonetheless, I can empathize with people who put Discusses on >> badly written documents. > >> I

Re: Language editing

2013-05-02 Thread Marc Petit-Huguenin
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA256 On 05/02/2013 02:40 PM, Yaron Sheffer wrote: > As a non-native English speaker, but a language pedant nonetheless, I can > empathize with people who put Discusses on badly written documents. > > I suggest that we budget for a number of WG drafts pe

Re: Language editing (was: tails and such)

2013-05-02 Thread Yaron Sheffer
As a non-native English speaker, but a language pedant nonetheless, I can empathize with people who put Discusses on badly written documents. I suggest that we budget for a number of WG drafts per year (say, 20 IETF-wide) to go through professional, paid-for heavy-duty editing, with these goal