RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-11

2012-10-09 Thread Black, David
Barry, 5) Statement that the string contains an FQDN, as stated for one case of the Tunnel-Client-Endpoint AVP in 4.5.4. That specific statement is incomplete, as it needs to be accompanied by a normative reference to a document that specifies the format of internationalized domain

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-11

2012-10-09 Thread Black, David
: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-11 On 09/18/2012 06:53 AM, Black, David wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments

Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-11

2012-10-08 Thread Barry Leiba
5) Statement that the string contains an FQDN, as stated for one case of the Tunnel-Client-Endpoint AVP in 4.5.4. That specific statement is incomplete, as it needs to be accompanied by a normative reference to a document that specifies the format of internationalized domain names, and

Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-11

2012-10-07 Thread Glen Zorn
On 09/18/2012 06:53 AM, Black, David wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-11

2012-09-18 Thread Black, David
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-11 Reviewer: