RE: [CCAMP] Last Call: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11.txt (Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling Extensions for the evolving G.709 Optical Transport Networks Contr

2013-09-11 Thread Fatai Zhang
Hi Adrian, I would like to propose the following text for the new section and discuss with you WG before I submit a new version. Further comments are appreciated. 8. Operations, Administration and

RE: [CCAMP] Last Call: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11.txt (Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling Extensions for the evolving G.709 Optical Transport Networks Contr

2013-09-06 Thread Fatai Zhang
Hi Adrian, I am updating this draft, but one issue is about the new small section. You said adding a small section including all of the statements you made in your email, but I really don't know which kind of section should be added to cover various aspects including management tools, OAM,

RE: [CCAMP] Last Call: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11.txt (Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling Extensions for the evolving G.709 Optical Transport Networks Contr

2013-08-21 Thread Fatai Zhang
Hi Adrian, Thanks very much. I can update the nits and editorial issues quickly, but I would like to discuss more with you for the following points to make things clear before I update the draft. =

RE: [CCAMP] Last Call: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11.txt (Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling Extensions for the evolving G.709 Optical Transport Networks Contr

2013-08-21 Thread Adrian Farrel
Hi Fatai, I think you nicely answered your own questions :-) I would suggest adding a small section including all of the statements you made in your email. (Well, no need to refer to Berlin and the CCAMP chairs :-) Cheers, Adrian From: Fatai Zhang [mailto:zhangfa...@huawei.com] Sent: 21

RE: [CCAMP] Last Call: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-11.txt (Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) Signaling Extensions for the evolving G.709 Optical Transport Networks Contr

2013-08-20 Thread Adrian Farrel
As sponsoring AD I have the following last call comments I hope you will take on board. Thanks, Adrian Please fix the two lines that are too long (see idnits) --- Please expand OTN on first use in the main text. Please expand TS on its first use. --- 6.2 The ingress node of an LSP MAY