Re: TSV-DIR review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03

2013-01-24 Thread Joe Touch
FWIW, this document includes text that somewhat defeats the previous recommendations of TCPM regarding RFC5927. RFC5927 includes specific text indicating that the techniques described are being documented, but that the TCP standard was NOT being changed to include those ICMP validation

Re: TSV-DIR review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03

2013-01-24 Thread Fernando Gont
Joe, On 01/24/2013 04:35 PM, Joe Touch wrote: FWIW, this document includes text that somewhat defeats the previous recommendations of TCPM regarding RFC5927. RFC5927 includes specific text indicating that the techniques described are being documented, but that the TCP standard was NOT being

Re: TSV-DIR review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03

2013-01-24 Thread Joe Touch
On 1/24/2013 1:24 PM, Fernando Gont wrote: Joe, On 01/24/2013 04:35 PM, Joe Touch wrote: FWIW, this document includes text that somewhat defeats the previous recommendations of TCPM regarding RFC5927. RFC5927 includes specific text indicating that the techniques described are being

Re: TSV-DIR review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03

2013-01-24 Thread Allison Mankin
Joe and Fernando, I just looked at how RFC 5297 is handled in the draft, to be that other pair of eyes. The first fix is right, to remove reference to RFC 5297 from that sentence entirely. Allison On Jan 24, 2013 7:19 PM, Joe Touch to...@isi.edu wrote: On 1/24/2013 1:24 PM, Fernando Gont

Re: TSV-DIR review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03

2013-01-24 Thread Joe Touch
Thanks - I wasn't positive about the second one. Glad to have it resolved quickly. Joe On 1/24/2013 5:57 PM, Allison Mankin wrote: Joe and Fernando, I just looked at how RFC 5297 is handled in the draft, to be that other pair of eyes. The first fix is right, to remove reference to RFC 5297

TSV-DIR review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03

2013-01-23 Thread Allison Mankin
Transport Directorate review of https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but

Re: TSV-DIR review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03

2013-01-23 Thread Fernando Gont
Hi, Allison, Thanks so much for your feedback! -- Please find my comments in-line On 01/23/2013 09:33 PM, Allison Mankin wrote: It is clearly valuable to call the community's attention to the atomic fragment in IPv6. This is an IPv6 datagram that is not actually fragmented, but has a