Reviewer: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
Review result: Ready
This version addressed my comments and concerns on v06.
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Hi Valery,
Thanks for engaging with me on this.
Your answers/suggestions below address all my comments and concerns.
Regards,
Rifaat
On Mon, Apr 1, 2024 at 11:45 AM Valery Smyslov wrote:
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Hi Valery,
See my replies below.
Regards,
Rifaat
On Mon, Apr 1, 2024 at 9:37 AM Valery Smyslov wrote:
> Hi Rifaat,
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> thank you for your review. Please, see inline.
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> > Reviewer: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
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Reviewer: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
Review result: Has Issues
# Section 3.1
* The description of the exchange seems odd, as it starts with the responder,
instead of the initiator. I suggest that the description of the exchange starts
with the initiator, followed by the responder.
* I think it would
Hi Valery,
Yes, the suggested text looks good to me.
Thanks,
Rifaat
On Thu, Aug 4, 2022 at 10:00 AM Valery Smyslov wrote:
> Hi Rifaat,
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> > Reviewer: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
> > Review result: Ready
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Reviewer: Rifaat Shekh-Yusef
Review result: Ready
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document ed
