Hello,
I've posted a new draft with a fix for the TCP Originator vs Original Initiator
explanation, and a couple typos.
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-07
I believe this addresses all outstanding comments!
Thanks,
Tommy
> On Feb 7, 2017, at 9:44 AM, Tommy Pauly
Hi Valery,
Thanks for the feedback! I'll clarify that the TCP Originator is the same as
the original initiator of the first IKE SA, as well as fixing the typographical
errors.
If anyone else has more feedback, please chime in! I'll wait a day or so before
updating the draft, to batch any
Hi Tommy,
thank you for the quick update. A couple nits:
1. Section 1.2:
s/the the/the
2. Section 1.2:
The TCP
Originator MUST be the same as the "Original Initiator", or the
Initiator of the first IKE SA exchange for a given IKE session.
Again, this is confusing. In
Hi Valery,
Thanks so much for your comments! I have posted a new version of the draft here:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-06
Responses inline.
Best,
Tommy
> On Feb 2, 2017, at 4:13 AM, Valery Smyslov wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> here is my review of
Hi,
here is my review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-05.
The draft is in a good shape, but a bit of final polishing is required.
1. The terms "tunnel", "tunneled" are used throughout the document
when referring to ESP SA. I think it is technically incorrect, since
ESP supports both