Re: [IPsec] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-05

Hello, I've posted a new draft with a fix for the TCP Originator vs Original Initiator explanation, and a couple typos. https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-07 I believe this addresses all outstanding comments! Thanks, Tommy > On Feb 7, 2017, at 9:44 AM, Tommy Pauly

Re: [IPsec] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-05

Hi Valery, Thanks for the feedback! I'll clarify that the TCP Originator is the same as the original initiator of the first IKE SA, as well as fixing the typographical errors. If anyone else has more feedback, please chime in! I'll wait a day or so before updating the draft, to batch any

Re: [IPsec] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-05

Hi Tommy, thank you for the quick update. A couple nits: 1. Section 1.2: s/the the/the 2. Section 1.2: The TCP Originator MUST be the same as the "Original Initiator", or the Initiator of the first IKE SA exchange for a given IKE session. Again, this is confusing. In

Re: [IPsec] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-05

Hi Valery, Thanks so much for your comments! I have posted a new version of the draft here: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-tcp-encaps-06 Responses inline. Best, Tommy > On Feb 2, 2017, at 4:13 AM, Valery Smyslov wrote: > > Hi, > > here is my review of