Hello again and thank you for the effort,
just a few more comments
Executive Summary, b2: The benefit is not clear. "Differentiate..., even
if it increases complexity". I would expect something along the lines
of: "Differentiate..., even if it increases complexity, because of this
and that b
On 09/08/2017 16:28, Yannis Nikolopoulos wrote:
> Hello again and thank you for the effort,
>
> just a few more comments
Hi,
Does that bring us to v.7 of the draft and another cycle? If so, let's
do it ;)
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> Executive Summary, b2: The benefit is not clear. "Differentiate..., even
> if it i
