Re: Formal Request for Approval: Simplified Artistic License

2002-10-28 Thread Robert Samuel White
I have significantly modified the license.  I apologize for not making
these changes before sending my original request for approval.  These
changes were necessary however.  I am going up against big business and
simply needed to clarify a few things and add a few added protections to
the license.  I do not expect any more changes to be made.  I feel this
license is solid and ready to undergo review by the OSI Board.



PACKAGE_NAME LICENSE

(Simplified Artistic License)

Preamble

Copyright COPYRIGHT_HOLDER, COPYRIGHT_YEAR.  All Rights
Reserved.

The intent of this document is to state the conditions under which
PACKAGE_NAME (Package), and derivatives of that collection of
files created through textual modification, may be copied, such that the
author, COPYRIGHT_HOLDER (Copyright Holder), maintains some
semblance of artistic control over the development of the Package, while
giving the users of the Package (You) the right to use and distribute
the
Package in a more-or-less customary fashion, plus the right to make
reasonable modifications.


Conditions of Redistribution and Use

You may redistribute and use this Package, in source and binary forms,
with or without modification, provided that the following conditions are
met:

- All distributions of this Package, and its derivatives, are subject to
this License.  Software offered in conjunction with this Package is not
necessarily subject to this condition. 

- Redistributions of the Package in source form must retain the original
copyright notices and associated comments that are denoted as an
attribution notice in the source code, as furnished by the Copyright
Holder.  Redistributions in binary form must reproduce the above
copyright notice, this list of conditions and the following disclaimer
in the documentation and/or other materials provided with the
distribution.

- If the source code of this Package was modified in any way, and these
changes are made as part of a redistribution of the Package, each file
that was modified must include the statement this file was modified
from its original version along with appropriate comments indicating
how and why the file was modified; these comments should be placed
directly underneath the attribution notice of each file.  If these
changes are being made for a binary distribution only, you must indicate
that you are using a modified version of the Package.  

- Any files supplied as input to or produced as output from the programs
of this Package, and any files that are designed to work in conjunction
with this Package, that are not distributed with the original Package as
supplied by the Copyright Holder, do not fall under the copyright of
this Package, but belong to whoever generated them.

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products derived from this Package without specific prior written
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PRODUCT_NAME, nor may PRODUCT_NAME appear in their name,
without specific prior written permission of the Copyright Holder.  You
may indicate that your software works in conjunction with PRODUCT
NAME by calling it Product for PRODUCT_NAME instead of
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exercise any of the rights granted to you by this License if you file a
lawsuit in any court against the Copyright Holder.


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DAMAGES 

Formal Request for Approval: Simplified Artistic License

2002-10-27 Thread Robert Samuel White
[My apologies if you receive this twice; I thought I sent it in text
format the first time...]

This is a formal request that the OSI Board approve the license I have
created, the Simplified Artistic License.  I have patiently listened to
all feedback regarding this license and adjusted it accordingly.  I have
also considered using every other license that has been approved by the
OSI; however none of them are appropriate to my needs, as will be
clearly stated below.  I believe this license fully complies with the
requirements of the OSD as well as the spirit of open source itself.  I
offer this license as a template so that it may be freely used by
anyone.  I hereby officially place this license into the public domain.
Please grant this license into the family of approved licenses.  Thank
you.


1.

This license is available at:  http://about.enetwizard.net/license.ehtml
and below as a template.

Information about my project (offered under this license) is available
at:  http://projects.enetwizard.net/cmserver.ehtml.


2. 

The Simplified Artistic License is loosely based upon the Artistic
License.  My license is based upon the Artistic License because I wish
to maintain some semblance of artistic control over my package, while
allowing the users of the package to use and distribute the package in a
more-or-less customary fashion, plus the right to make reasonable
modifications.  The Artistic License does not meet my needs for the
following reasons:

A.  The license makes many references to Perl and C code; software
artists use many different programming languages.
B.  The license places too many restrictions on the user which are
unnecessary to my package.
C.  The license places too many conditions, some of which are
archaic to modern day development of the web environment.
D.  The language is too complicated; I do not feel such complicated
language is necessary for a license with few restrictions. 

As of yet, the points behind the need for the Simplified Artistic
License have not been answered by anyone citing a similar suitable
license.  Only the AFL has been suggested, and Larry Rosen's post on the
subject shows why it is unsuitable.  An artistic license is appropriate
for those who consider their packages to be artistic works and feel
strongly about maintaining some semblance of artistic control over
their packages.  As such, the Simplified Artistic License has its place
among the family of approved licenses, and makes a suitable alternative
to the already-approved Artistic License.

The Simplified Artistic License is considerably different than the
Artistic License and therefore explaining exactly how it has changed
would be difficult.  However, in the interest of fully complying with
the formal instructions placed on the OSI website, I will attempt to do
so now:

A.  The Simplified Artistic License removes most of the restrictions
and conditions which are a part of the Artistic License.
B.  The Simplified Artistic License requires that the Attribution
Notice contained within the source files not be modified.
C.  The Simplified Artistic License requires that changes to the
source files (if planned for distribution) be properly documented in
order to avoid confusion with the original package.

That is pretty much the extent of the conditions I wish to place upon my
package; I consider everything else to be up to the user.  In my
opinion, this is the most appropriate way to prevent confusion with the
original package, and as such, maintaining some semblance of artistic
control.


3.

Derivative works of this package must be offered under this license; it
is the only way to ensure that the artistic control of this package
remain intact.  However, software offered in conjunction with the
package offered under this license is up to the artist of that package,
and I do not see any conflicts.


4.

I will submit this license via email to license-approval and
license-discuss.


5-7.

If you find that my license complies with the OSD and the spirit of open
source, I expect that my license will be approved this time, without any
further attempts at prevention or coercion.


8.

I look forward to reaching #8 as posted on your website.


PACKAGE_NAME LICENSE

(Simplified Artistic License)

Preamble

Copyright COPYRIGHT_HOLDER, COPYRIGHT_YEAR.  All Rights
Reserved.

The intent of this document is to state the conditions under which
PACKAGE_NAME (Package), and derivatives of that collection of
files created through textual modification, may be copied, such that the
author, COPYRIGHT_HOLDER (Copyright Holder), maintains some
semblance of artistic control over the development of the Package, while
giving the users of the Package the right to use and distribute the
Package in a more-or-less customary fashion, plus the right to make
reasonable modifications.


Conditions of Redistribution and Use

You may redistribute and use this Package, in source and binary forms,
with or without 

Re: Formal Request for Approval: Simplified Artistic License

2002-10-27 Thread David Johnson
From my perspective, this license meets the Open Source Definition. I do have 
some minor comments.

 - Redistributions of the Package in source form must retain the original
 copyright notices and associated comments that are included at the
 beginning of each source file, denoted as an attribution notice, as
 furnished by the Copyright Holder, both in the Package itself and in any
 documentation and/or other materials provided with the distribution of
 the Package in source form.

Does this mean that I must copy the attribution notice from the source code 
into the documentation, if it isn't already there? This clause could stand a 
bit of simplification. (but then again, I am not a lawyer, so I like simple 
stuff)

 - The scripts and library files supplied as input to or produced as
 output from the programs of this Package do not automatically fall under
 the copyright of this Package, but belong to whoever generated them, and
 may be sold commercially, and may be aggregated with this Package.

I would lose the word automatically. I don't think it adds anything, but may 
cause confusion over how such files might fall under the copyright.

 - Redistributions of any form whatsoever must retain the following
 acknowledgment:
This product includes PRODUCT_NAME, freely available from
 PRODUCT_URL

Where is this acknowledgement placed? If it's in the source code and 
documentation of the Package, there is no problem. If it must be placed 
outside of the package, then you run into the old advertisement clause that 
BSD had so much problem with.

-- 
David Johnson
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