Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-05 Thread markpolesky
Wow, this is almost done. New patch set uploaded. I've responded to some comments individually, and made a lot of small changes requested, but I want to call everyone's attention to the TODO on l.1504, regarding this clause: the reference point of a non-staff line is its highest point. Keith

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-05 Thread tdanielsmusic
LGTM; just a minor typo and a suggestion to remove inadvisable code. http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/14001/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right):

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-05 Thread markpolesky
Pushed with some final changes: http://git.sv.gnu.org/gitweb/?p=lilypond.git;a=commitdiff;h=a3f254b Closing this issue now. Thanks everyone! - Mark http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/ ___ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-04 Thread markpolesky
Here's the next patch set for the Vertical spacing inside a system doc stuff. I tried to address everything you guys mentioned; let me know what you think. One significant thing I did here was to remove the entire @subsection called Vertical spacing between systems, since I don't think it was

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-04 Thread v . villenave
Hi Mark, It's the first time I read your NR4 patches, so I may certainly have missed a few things. Your patch looks good, but I was a bit surprised by the overall writing style of NR4. This chapter looks odd to me, and somehow not on par NR1 and 2. It's obviously a whole chapter that hasn't

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-04 Thread tdanielsmusic
I've limited my comments to just one :) I think we need to push this now and move on - we still have to change all the names, and a further review of the wording after that might suggest a few more tweaks. I'm sure more clarification will be necessary after users try to understand and use this,

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-04 Thread Carl . D . Sorensen
LGTM. Thanks, Mark. Carl http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/ ___ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-04 Thread percival . music . ca
http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/14001/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/14001/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode256 Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:256: a system is the

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-11-04 Thread k-ohara5a5a
Mark, Too long, but hard to say what will be useful without getting away for a while. Looks good to me, whether you either take or leave my suggestions. http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/14001/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right):

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-29 Thread k-ohara5a5a
http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode1501 Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:1501: @item @emph{staff-like

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-29 Thread Ian Hulin
On 29/10/10 05:12, k-ohara5...@oco.net wrote: http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode1509

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-29 Thread Keith E OHara
On Fri, 29 Oct 2010 01:17:00 -0700, Ian Hulin i...@hulin.org.uk wrote: On 29/10/10 05:12, Keith wrote: Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:1513: * Inter-system spacing properties:: Within-system You said: inter = between, intra = within [...] or do you mean the original Inter-system

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-28 Thread k-ohara5a5a
http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode1509 Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:1509: available. Then, the

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-28 Thread joeneeman
http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode1662 Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:1662:

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-27 Thread markpolesky
http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode1624 Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:1624: size) will always reset

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-26 Thread joeneeman
http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode1624 Documentation/notation/spacing.itely:1624: size) will always reset

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-23 Thread tdanielsmusic
Looks pretty good, Mark. I've suggested a couple of changes near the top. Trevor http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right):

Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-22 Thread markpolesky
Reviewers: , Message: Here's a completely rewritten version of NR 4.4.1 Vertical spacing inside a system Comments? Thanks. - Mark Description: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. Please review this at http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/ Affected files: M Documentation/notation/spacing.itely

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-22 Thread Carl . D . Sorensen
Mark, I think this is a great start, and will greatly help. The major issues I see are (1) repeating information (i.e. the meanings of space, minimum-distance, padding, and stretchability), and (2) introducing exhaustive lists into the NR. Repeating information is prohibited by policy because

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-22 Thread markpolesky
On 2010/10/23 00:51:31, Carl wrote: Mark, I think this is a great start, and will greatly help. The major issues I see are (1) repeating information (i.e. the meanings of space, minimum-distance, padding, and stretchability), and (2) introducing exhaustive lists into the NR. Carl, (1)

Re: Doc: NR 4.4.1: Rewrite. (issue2642043)

2010-10-22 Thread Carl . D . Sorensen
More comments inlined. Thanks, Carl http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely File Documentation/notation/spacing.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/2642043/diff/1/Documentation/notation/spacing.itely#newcode1501