Re: [Lsr] draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-04 Shepherd review

2018-07-09 Thread Loa Andersson
Folks, I agree - no reason to delay! There is one small difference between what is in the document and what is in the RFC I pointed to The document has "...as described in [BCP 14] [RFC2119] [RFC8174]..." While RFC has "...as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174]..." The reference list

Re: [Lsr] draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-04 Shepherd review

2018-07-09 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Hi Peter, Strange, I'd remove the reference to [BCP14] since RFC 8174 and BCP 14 are the same document. I'm going to request publication as this certainly isn't enough to delay for an update. Thanks, Acee On 7/9/18, 8:26 AM, "Peter Psenak (ppsenak)" wrote: Hi Acee, that is

Re: [Lsr] draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-04 Shepherd review

2018-07-09 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Hi Peter, The new boiler plate for requirements language, with references to both RFC 2119 and RFC 8174, is: 1.1. Requirements Language The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and

Re: [Lsr] draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-04 Shepherd review

2018-07-09 Thread Peter Psenak
Hi Yingzhen, thanks for your review. As regards to first IDNITS warning, not sure about the first one, I took the section "Requirements Language" from RFC8395 as suggested by Loa. RFC2119 is only referenced there, that should not be a problem though. I removed the reference to ISO10589.

[Lsr] draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-04 Shepherd review

2018-07-08 Thread Yingzhen Qu
Dear authors, I have done shepherd review of draft-ietf-ospf-lls-id-04 as requested by LSR chairs. I’d like to thank all authors for their contributions on this document, also people who have reviewed this document and provided valuable comments and discussions. The document is well written