Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09

2019-10-03 Thread Peter Psenak
Hi Dhruv, On 03/10/2019 16:48, Peter Psenak wrote: (3) Section 3, Add reference to draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label for the definition and usage of ERLD ##PP The Introduction section has: "This capability, referred to as Entropy Readable Label Depth (ERLD) as defined

Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09

2019-10-03 Thread Peter Psenak
Hi Dhruv, On 03/10/2019 16:14, Dhruv Dhody wrote: Hi Peter, Snipping to open points... (1) Please use updated requirement language text as per RFC 8174, as you do have a mix of upper-case and lower-case terms in your I-D. The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL

Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09

2019-10-03 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Peter, Snipping to open points... > > (1) Please use updated requirement language text as per RFC 8174, as you do > > have a mix of upper-case and lower-case terms in your I-D. > > > >The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL > >NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD

Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09

2019-10-03 Thread Peter Psenak
Hi Dhruv, please see inline (##PP) On 12/09/2019 12:11, Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Issues Subject: RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09 Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft.

Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09

2019-09-13 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Thanks Dhruv for the review... Peter and other authors, Please include Dhruv's comments or respond as to why they are being omitted. Thanks, Acee On 9/12/19, 6:12 AM, "Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker" wrote: Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Issues Subject: RtgDir

[Lsr] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09

2019-09-12 Thread Dhruv Dhody via Datatracker
Reviewer: Dhruv Dhody Review result: Has Issues Subject: RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc-09 Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft. ​https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-mpls-elc/ The routing directorate will, on request