[Lwip] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lwig-curve-representations-12

2020-09-07 Thread Roni Even via Datatracker
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-lwig-curve-representations-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2020-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is almost ready for publication as Informational RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
I am wondering about the appendixes of this document, I did not see and
references for them but for example doing search on the Internet I noticed that
https://nvlpubs.nist.gov/nistpubs/SpecialPublications/NIST.SP.800-186-draft.pdf
has the same text as appendix A. Which one is the source.



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[Lwip] [Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10.txt]

2020-09-07 Thread Carles Gomez Montenegro
Dear all,

We just submitted revision -10 of the "TCP Usage Guidance in the Internet
of Things (IoT)" draft.

The main changes in this revision are intended to address:

- Erik Kline's comments after his AD review.

- A comment from Markku Kojo on advice given in RFC 6691.

Thanks to both, Erik and Markku, for your valuable feedback!

Cheers,

Carles (on behalf of all authors)


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Subject: [Lwip] I-D Action:
draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10.txt
From:internet-dra...@ietf.org
Date:Mon, September 7, 2020 8:17 am
To:  i-d-annou...@ietf.org
Cc:  lwip@ietf.org
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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Light-Weight Implementation Guidance WG
of the IETF.

Title   : TCP Usage Guidance in the Internet of Things (IoT)
Authors : Carles Gomez
  Jon Crowcroft
  Michael Scharf
Filename: draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10.txt
Pages   : 30
Date: 2020-09-06

Abstract:
   This document provides guidance on how to implement and use the
   Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) in Constrained-Node Networks
   (CNNs), which are a characterstic of the Internet of Things (IoT).
   Such environments require a lightweight TCP implementation and may
   not make use of optional functionality.  This document explains a
   number of known and deployed techniques to simplify a TCP stack as
   well as corresponding tradeoffs.  The objective is to help embedded
   developers with decisions on which TCP features to use.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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[Lwip] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10.txt

2020-09-07 Thread internet-drafts


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Light-Weight Implementation Guidance WG of the 
IETF.

Title   : TCP Usage Guidance in the Internet of Things (IoT)
Authors : Carles Gomez
  Jon Crowcroft
  Michael Scharf
Filename: draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10.txt
Pages   : 30
Date: 2020-09-06

Abstract:
   This document provides guidance on how to implement and use the
   Transmission Control Protocol (TCP) in Constrained-Node Networks
   (CNNs), which are a characterstic of the Internet of Things (IoT).
   Such environments require a lightweight TCP implementation and may
   not make use of optional functionality.  This document explains a
   number of known and deployed techniques to simplify a TCP stack as
   well as corresponding tradeoffs.  The objective is to help embedded
   developers with decisions on which TCP features to use.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-10


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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