Thanks for the quick review! Comments inline.
Kent Watsen wrote:
>
> 1: paragraph starting w/ "In some cases", 1st sentence, s/often/sometimes/
fixed.
> 2: add ref to RFC 8174
fixed.
> 2.1: s/defines a label for/defines the label for/
> 3.1:
> a) 2nd paragraph,
Greetings,
We are running a 2 week WGLC again on draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount in
order to review the proposed changes in draft 09.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount/
the 08 - 09 diff is available here:
1: paragraph starting w/ "In some cases", 1st sentence, s/often/sometimes/
2: add ref to RFC 8174
2.1: s/defines a label for/defines the label for/
3.1:
a) 2nd paragraph, s/defines a label for/defines the label for/
b) 4th paragraph, add ref to RFC 6020
3.2, 1st paragraph:
a) 1st