Re: [netmod] kw review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-09

2018-03-21 Thread Martin Bjorklund
Thanks for the quick review! Comments inline. Kent Watsen wrote: > > 1: paragraph starting w/ "In some cases", 1st sentence, s/often/sometimes/ fixed. > 2: add ref to RFC 8174 fixed. > 2.1: s/defines a label for/defines the label for/ > 3.1: > a) 2nd paragraph,

[netmod] WGLC - draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount (version 09)

2018-03-21 Thread joel jaeggli
Greetings, We are running a 2 week WGLC again on draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount in order to review the proposed changes in draft 09. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount/ the 08 - 09 diff is available here:

[netmod] kw review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-09

2018-03-21 Thread Kent Watsen
1: paragraph starting w/ "In some cases", 1st sentence, s/often/sometimes/ 2: add ref to RFC 8174 2.1: s/defines a label for/defines the label for/ 3.1: a) 2nd paragraph, s/defines a label for/defines the label for/ b) 4th paragraph, add ref to RFC 6020 3.2, 1st paragraph: a) 1st