Hi, Joel Jaeggli <joe...@bogus.com> wrote: > Greetings, > > This was supposed to get processed shortly after IETF 106, however I lost > track of it. We are therefore running a 2 week WGLC on > draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-03. > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff/ > > the 02 - 03 diff is available here: > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-02&url2=draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-03 > > Please send email to the list indicating your support or concerns.
I have reviewed draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-03 and have some comments. o Section 4 (The filter dow not contain expressions that would match values data nodes, as this is not required by most use cases and would complicate the scheme, from implementation to dealing with race conditions.) I don't think it is a good idea to reject filters that match values. For example, suppose I want to compare the config for a specific interface. I could do /interfaces/interfac[name='eth0'], or a subtree filter. Why should this not be possible? Besides, the mechanism of rejecting such filters is not defined. The only text we have is this sentence within parentheses. o leaf all in the YANG module s/Specifically, if one/For example, if one/ o leaf xpath-filter The description needs to specify the XPath context, see RFC 6991. o container differences It is not clear what the YANG patch records reflect. Is it the patches that are required to go from "source" to "target"? Or the other way around? o anydata source-value This description needs work. The current text isn't correct ('value' is not present when the operation is 'move'). The description should explain what this is supposed to contain. o Section 6 The example is confusing. It seems the diff is the patches required to go from target to source. And the source-value contains the origin present in the target, is that correct? And the value contains an origin that isn't present in neither the source nor the target. /martin _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod