Re: [netmod] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12

2016-05-25 Thread Kent Watsen
>> I think it would be better to use a more generic term for rpc + >> actions. Maybe operations: >> >>YANG is a data modeling language used to model configuration data, >>state data, operations, and notifications for network management >>protocols. > >I like 'operations' and the

Re: [netmod] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12

2016-05-25 Thread Juergen Schoenwaelder
On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 12:12:11PM +0200, Martin Bjorklund wrote: > Juergen Schoenwaelder wrote: > > On Mon, May 23, 2016 at 03:43:09PM +0200, Martin Bjorklund wrote: > > > > > wor...@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) wrote: > > > > > > > > - Abstract > > > > >

Re: [netmod] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12

2016-05-25 Thread Martin Bjorklund
Ladislav Lhotka wrote: > > > On 24 May 2016, at 16:33, Dale R. Worley wrote: > > > > (I've not received some of the discussion e-mails, so I am just now > > responding.) > > > > Ladislav Lhotka writes: > >> This follows from the fact that

Re: [netmod] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12

2016-05-24 Thread Ladislav Lhotka
Martin Bjorklund writes: >> >>if-feature-expr = "(" if-feature-expr ")" / >> if-feature-expr sep boolean-operator sep >>if-feature-expr / >> not-keyword sep if-feature-expr / >>

Re: [netmod] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12

2016-05-23 Thread Martin Bjorklund
Ladislav Lhotka wrote: > > > On 23 May 2016, at 15:43, Martin Bjorklund wrote: > > > > > >> - section 3.1 > >> > >> There is an overall question regarding whitespace in XML in > >> "non-significant" places. Is it allowed in the XML representation of > >> data

Re: [netmod] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12

2016-05-23 Thread Ladislav Lhotka
> On 23 May 2016, at 15:43, Martin Bjorklund wrote: > > >> - section 3.1 >> >> There is an overall question regarding whitespace in XML in >> "non-significant" places. Is it allowed in the XML representation of >> data trees? And if so, precisely what whitespace is allowed?

Re: [netmod] Gen-ART IETF Last Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12

2016-05-23 Thread Martin Bjorklund
Hi, Thank you for your thorough review! Comments inline. wor...@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these