Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-29 Thread Lou Berger
All,     The WG LC is closed. Authors,     Please continue resolving the raised issues on the list, and let the WG know once a version that addresses all raised issues has been uploaded/published.  Also please also summarize any includes changes that were not otherwise discussed on-list.

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-29 Thread Kent Watsen
Hi Martin, >> When a larger document contains multiple instances of text content >> that may need to be folded or unfolded, it is assumed that another >> process inserts/extracts the individual text content instances to/ >> from the larger document prior to utilizing the algorithms

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-29 Thread Martin Bjorklund
Kent Watsen wrote: > > > Hi Martin, > > Thanks for your review. > > > > I have reviewed draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02, and here are my > > comments: [...] > > The algorithm talks specifically about space (' ') rather than > > whitespace. > > True and, FWIW, this was the only

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-29 Thread Martin Bjorklund
Kent Watsen wrote: > > > > [RW] > > Yes, I think that is better, and probably OK. > > > > I still slightly question “One strategy is based on the time-proven use of > > a single backslash ('\') character to indicate where line-folding has > > occurred, with the continuation occurring with

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-29 Thread Italo Busi
: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 Hi Italo, Thank you for the text suggestion, I landed on the following text: For readability purposes, this script forces the minimally supported line length to be eight characters longer than the raw header text defined in Section 7.1.1 and Section

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-28 Thread Kent Watsen
> [RW] > Perhaps, less is more, e.g., > > “One strategy is based on the historical use of a single backslash ('\') > character to indicate where line-folding has occurred.”? Replaced. > [RW] > So, for example considering the current text, if it was a JSON input file, it > would be more

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-28 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
From: Kent Watsen Sent: 28 May 2019 17:53 To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) Cc: netmod@ietf.org; draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-fold...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 [RW] Yes, I think that is better, and probably OK. I still slightly question “One

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-28 Thread Kent Watsen
> [RW] > Yes, I think that is better, and probably OK. > > I still slightly question “One strategy is based on the time-proven use of a > single backslash ('\') character to indicate where line-folding has occurred, > with the continuation occurring with the first non-space (' ') character

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-28 Thread Kent Watsen
;> > Cc: Lou Berger mailto:lber...@labn.net>>; netmod@ietf.org > <mailto:netmod@ietf.org>; netmod-cha...@ietf.org > <mailto:netmod-cha...@ietf.org> > Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 > > > Hi Italo, > > &g

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-28 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Kent, Please see inline ... From: Kent Watsen Sent: 28 May 2019 16:37 To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) Cc: netmod@ietf.org; draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-fold...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 Hi Rob, Thanks for your review. Comments below. 1

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-28 Thread Kent Watsen
Hi Rob, Thanks for your review. Comments below. > 1) Abstract: > I wasn't sure whether the abstract is still entirely accurate, given that the > document describes two strategies rather than one, only one of those > strategies is time proven ('\'), and only one of those strategies works on

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-28 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
From: netmod On Behalf Of Lou Berger > Sent: 12 May 2019 22:20 > To: NetMod WG > Cc: NetMod WG Chairs > Subject: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 > > > All, > > This starts a two-week working group last call for > draft-ietf-netmod-artwork

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-28 Thread Italo Busi
the sender by phone or email immediately and delete it! From: Kent Watsen [mailto:k...@watsen.net] Sent: lunedì 27 maggio 2019 19:57 To: Italo Busi Cc: Lou Berger ; netmod@ietf.org; netmod-cha...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 Hi Italo, 1

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-27 Thread Kent Watsen
Hi Martin, Thanks for your review. > I have reviewed draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02, and here are my > comments: > > > o 6 > > Perhaps: > > OLD: > > begins at the first non- > whitespace character on the following line. > > NEW: > > begins at the first character that

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-27 Thread Kent Watsen
Hi Italo, > 1) Section 7.2.1 (Folding for Single Backslash Strategy) says: > > Ensure that the desired maximum line length is not less than the > minimum header, which is 46 characters. If the desired maximum line > length is less than this minimum, exit (this text-based content >

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-27 Thread Martin Bjorklund
Hi, I have reviewed draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02, and here are my comments: o 6 Perhaps: OLD: begins at the first non- whitespace character on the following line. NEW: begins at the first character that is not a space character (' ') on the following line.

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-25 Thread Chongfeng Xie
I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication. Chongfeng 发件人: netmod [mailto:netmod-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Lou Berger 发送时间: 2019年5月13日 5:20 收件人: NetMod WG 抄送: NetMod WG Chairs 主题: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 All, This starts

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-24 Thread Italo Busi
instead of 45 and 46 respectively) Is my understanding correct? Thanks, Italo -Original Message- From: Lou Berger [mailto:lber...@labn.net] Sent: domenica 12 maggio 2019 23:20 To: NetMod WG Cc: NetMod WG Chairs Subject: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 All, Th

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-21 Thread Kent Watsen
Since the response is tepid so far, and the request says "even from authors"... I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication. Kent // co-author > On May 12, 2019, at 5:19 PM, Lou Berger wrote: > > > All, > > This starts a two-week working group last call for >

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-21 Thread wangzitao
I support the WGLC, it is ready for the publication. B.R. -Michael -邮件原件- 发件人: netmod [mailto:netmod-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Lou Berger 发送时间: 2019年5月13日 5:20 收件人: NetMod WG 抄送: NetMod WG Chairs 主题: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 All, This starts a two-week

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-12 Thread Qin Wu
Support as coauthor and it is ready for publication. -Qin -邮件原件- 发件人: netmod [mailto:netmod-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Jeff Tantsura 发送时间: 2019年5月13日 6:40 收件人: Lou Berger 抄送: NetMod WG Chairs ; NetMod WG 主题: Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 Lou, I support

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-12 Thread Jeff Tantsura
Lou, I support the progress of the draft and it is ready for the publication. Regards, Jeff > On May 12, 2019, at 14:19, Lou Berger wrote: > > > All, > > This starts a two-week working group last call for > draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 > > The working group last call ends on May

Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-12 Thread Adrian Farrel
: NetMod WG Chairs Subject: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 All, This starts a two-week working group last call for draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 The working group last call ends on May 27. Please send your comments to the working group mailing list. Positive

[netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

2019-05-12 Thread Lou Berger
All, This starts a two-week working group last call for draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02 The working group last call ends on May 27. Please send your comments to the working group mailing list. Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for