On Wed, Nov 27, 2019 at 06:35:24AM -0800, Carl Moberg via Datatracker wrote: > Reviewer: Carl Moberg > Review result: Ready with Nits > > This is my YANG doctors review of the ietf-factory-default.yang module as > part of draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-07. > > The module cleanly passes validation using the YANG validator site and > I have successfully loaded it into one NETCONF server implementation. > > This module is ready with a cosmetic nit and a suggestion. > > I suggest fixing the following textual nit: > > OLD > configuration datastores (i.e.,<running> , <startup><candidate>) to > their factory default content."; > > NEW: > configuration datastores (i.e. <running>, <startup>, and > <candidate>) to their factory default content.";
FWIW, the RFC style guide wants both comma and space after "i.e." (and comma before it, as well, when not enclosed in a parenthetical). -Ben _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod
