Re: [OAUTH-WG] WGLC Review of PAR

2020-09-03 Thread Torsten Lodderstedt
Thanks to all. I incorporated the text into the upcoming next revision of the draft. > On 3. Sep 2020, at 14:14, Dave Tonge wrote: > > Looks really good to me, thanks Brian. > > On Wed, 2 Sep 2020 at 21:42, Brian Campbell > wrote: > Thanks Torsten, Taka, and Justin, > > I took the revised

Re: [OAUTH-WG] WGLC Review of PAR

2020-09-03 Thread Torsten Lodderstedt
yes. > On 3. Sep 2020, at 13:33, Brian Campbell wrote: > > Do you mean just putting the "Note:" back in front of it? WFM. > > > > On Thu, Sep 3, 2020 at 12:11 AM Torsten Lodderstedt > wrote: > Thanks Brian! > > I suggest to put a Note: in front of the last paragraph to indicate it is >

Re: [OAUTH-WG] WGLC Review of PAR

2020-09-03 Thread Dave Tonge
Looks really good to me, thanks Brian. On Wed, 2 Sep 2020 at 21:42, Brian Campbell wrote: > Thanks Torsten, Taka, and Justin, > > I took the revised text from Justin and tweaked it with some typo cleanup > and minor adjustments to make what is hopefully a final proposal below. I > had a similar

Re: [OAUTH-WG] WGLC Review of PAR

2020-09-03 Thread Brian Campbell
Do you mean just putting the "Note:" back in front of it? WFM. On Thu, Sep 3, 2020 at 12:11 AM Torsten Lodderstedt wrote: > Thanks Brian! > > I suggest to put a Note: in front of the last paragraph to indicate it is > additional infomercial. > > WDYT? > > > Am 03.09.2020 um 02:29 schrieb

Re: [OAUTH-WG] WGLC Review of PAR

2020-09-03 Thread Torsten Lodderstedt
Thanks Brian! I suggest to put a Note: in front of the last paragraph to indicate it is additional infomercial. WDYT? > Am 03.09.2020 um 02:29 schrieb Justin Richer : > > Nice work, Brian. Looks good to me! > > From: Brian Campbell