Re: [OAUTH-WG] draft-ietf-oauth-rar-08 review

2022-01-22 Thread Torsten Lodderstedt
Hi Hannes, > Am 21.12.2021 um 13:06 schrieb Hannes Tschofenig : > > Hi all, > > thanks for writing this document. I have read through it as part of my > shepherd writeup and here are a few comments and questions. thank you very much for your thorough review. We have tried to incorporate

[OAUTH-WG] draft-ietf-oauth-rar-08 review

2021-12-21 Thread Hannes Tschofenig
Hi all, thanks for writing this document. I have read through it as part of my shepherd writeup and here are a few comments and questions. Generic Comments: As a style issue, it would be good to treat code segments as figures with a figure headings so that references in the text is easier to