Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Thomas, Thank you for promptly addressing the comments. Looks good to me, but idnits is still not happy with these long lines of Table 1: == ** There are 12 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one being 2 characters in excess of 72. == One very very minor nit:

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Tianran, all, Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Tianran Zhou [mailto:zhoutian...@huawei.com] Envoyé : jeudi 24 juin 2021 05:09 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-t...@ietf.org; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org Cc : opsawg@ietf.org Objet : RE: Shepherd Review of

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread Thomas.Graf
Hi Med, Many thanks for the shepherd review. I updated the document accordingly into -03 version. https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-03 I included all your suggestions and followed your example in using abbreviations and changed the term "MPLS Segment

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-03.txt

2021-06-23 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : Export of MPLS Segment Routing Label Type Information in IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread Tianran Zhou
Hi Med, >>Why the document is in the "Standard Track"? >>I failed to see any valid reason especially that: >>* The IANA policy for the target registry is Expert Review. >>* We don't have any normative statements in the document. The registry does not require the standard track document. But this

[OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Thomas, all, I made a shepherd review of the document. The review can be found at: * pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06-rev%20Med.pdf * doc: