Hello opsawg,
I gave a read to draft-palmero-opsawg-dmlmo-01, and discussed it with Marisol
on a call, but I thought I could share my main remarks here:
1. One of the basic use cases of the draft is to find information about
features and licenses (e.g. which feature(s) are enabled by a
>Title : Authorized update to MUD URLs
>Authors : Michael Richardson
> Wei Pan
> Eliot Lear
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group
WG of the IETF.
Title : Authorized update to MUD URLs
Authors : Michael Richardson
Hi Rob,
Thank you very much for the review! We'll update the draft as you suggested.
Best regards,
Haoyu
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From: Rob Wilton (rwilton)
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Subject: RE: AD review of
Sigh, this also appears to be truncated in my email client.
To be sure that you see all the comments (i.e., to the end of the document),
please either see the previous attachment. The full email can also be seen in
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Sorry, the IETF mail filters have truncated my email. I'll resend as HTML to
see if that helps.
Rob
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From: Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Sent: 06 October 2021 11:35
To: draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org
Cc: opsawg@ietf.org
Subject: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07
Hi,
Here is my belated AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07.txt.
I would like to thank you for the effort that you have put into this document,
and apologise for my long delay in reviewing it.
Broadly, I think that this is a good and useful framework, but in some of the
latter parts of the
