[OPSAWG] [IANA #1261400] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang (ns)

2022-12-09 Thread Amanda Baber via RT
Hi Tim (cc: opsawg WG), It looks like there have been a number of updates to this document in version -10 (you would've reviewed -09). Does this need another review? https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-10 This is on Thursday's IESG telechat agenda. If

[OPSAWG] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-10

2022-12-09 Thread Xufeng Liu via Datatracker
Reviewer: Xufeng Liu Review result: Ready with Issues This is a review of the YANG module in draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-10. Sec 5.1. and 5.2 1) The container “client-profile” is duplicated twice. Is there any reason for the duplication? 2) As a convention, in IETF YANG modules, the node name of

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-dahm-opsawg-tacacs-security-01.txt Douglas Gash , John Heasley ,

2022-12-09 Thread heasley
Hello, This submission has no changes from -00, it is only to bump the expiration date. Fri, Dec 09, 2022 at 11:38:29AM -0800, internet-dra...@ietf.org: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > Title : TACACS+ Security and SSH

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Last Call for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-acceptable-urls-05

2022-12-09 Thread Michael Richardson
Henk Birkholz wrote: > This internet draft updates RFC8520. The authors believe the I think that this document needs to be Proposed Standard. It normatively updates RFC8520, which I believe went through as AD Sponsored, which itself is PS. -- Michael Richardson. o O ( IPv6 IøT

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Last Call for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-05

2022-12-09 Thread Michael Richardson
Henk Birkholz wrote: > Please reply with your active support (+1 required) or objections and you > assessment of whether or not it is ready to proceed to publication before > January 6th 2023. As an author, I think that it's ready to go. There was some DT activity to mark it's

[OPSAWG]  WG Last Call for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-05

2022-12-09 Thread Henk Birkholz
Dear OPSAWG members, this email starts a four week period for a Working Group Last Call of https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-05.html ending on Friday, January 6th 2023. Several reviews of this document were submitted. The most recent one from the

[OPSAWG]  WG Last Call for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-acceptable-urls-05

2022-12-09 Thread Henk Birkholz
Dear OPSAWG members, this email starts a four week period for a Working Group Last Call of https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-acceptable-urls-05.html ending on Friday, January 6th 2023. This internet draft updates RFC8520. The authors believe the Internet-Draft is ready

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-09

2022-12-09 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, Sorry, still not clear (in my head) on the exact differentiation between sap-status and service-status. Also, a few other nits that I spotted: s/is capable to host/is capable of hosting/ (two places) s/ that uniquely identifies SAP/ that uniquely identifies a SAP/ s/ are tagged as ready