[OPSAWG] FW: New Version Notification for draft-tgraf-opsawg-ipfix-on-path-telemetry-01.txt

2022-12-19 Thread Thomas.Graf
Dear OPSAWG and IPPM, We received at IETF 115 some feedback and comments. We added a terminology section, the reference to RFC 9232 Network Telemetry Framework and some minor editorial changes. As always, feedback and comments are very welcome. Looking forward for the adoption call at OPSAWG.

[OPSAWG] Last Call: (A YANG Network Model for Service Attachment Points (SAPs)) to Proposed Standard

2022-12-19 Thread The IESG
The IESG has received a request from the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG (opsawg) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Network Model for Service Attachment Points (SAPs)' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-07

2022-12-19 Thread Alan DeKok
On Dec 19, 2022, at 11:53 AM, Rob Wilton (rwilton) wrote: > It isn't really clear to me why some of the registries are needed, > specifically the ones in 8.4.1 and 8.4.2. Why not allow any v4 or v6 DHCP > attribute to be carried within the DHCPv6-Options or DHCPv4-Options field? The

[OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-07

2022-12-19 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi, Thanks for this document. Here are my AD review comments for draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-07 Moderate level comments: (1) p 2, sec 1. Introduction This document specifies two new RADIUS attributes: DHCPv6-Options (Section 3.1) and DHCPv4-Options (Section 3.2) Attributes.

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-09

2022-12-19 Thread tom petch
From: Rob Wilton (rwilton) Sent: 19 December 2022 14:19 Hi Tom, My understanding is that service is the top list (i.e., node/service) and the saps are in the per service child list: augment /nw:networks/nw:network/nw:node: +--rw service* [service-type]

[OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12

2022-12-19 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Eliot, Scott, Thanks for this document. Here is my AD review for draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-12. Moderate level comments: (1) p 3, sec 1. Introduction To enable application-layer discovery, this memo defines a well-known URI [RFC8615]. Management or orchestration tools can

[OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-10

2022-12-19 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Kevin, Sorry for the delay. Here are my AD review comments for draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-10. All my comments are pretty minor. Please let me know if you have any questions/comments, or otherwise can just post an updated version which I can then send off for IETF LC. Minor level

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-09

2022-12-19 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, Great, thanks. I've request IETF LC on -12. If any clarifications or changes are required based on the question raised by Tom then please can you resolve that as part of the IETF LC. Regards, Rob > -Original Message- > From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > Sent: 16 December

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-09

2022-12-19 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Tom, My understanding is that service is the top list (i.e., node/service) and the saps are in the per service child list: augment /nw:networks/nw:network/nw:node: +--rw service* [service-type] +--rw service-type identityref

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-09

2022-12-19 Thread tom petch
From: OPSAWG on behalf of mohamed.boucad...@orange.com Sent: 12 December 2022 12:52 Hi Rob, Thanks for the follow-up. After rereading the initial proposed updated text, I think that you have a valid point about the need for more clarity when describing the relationship between the various