Re: [OPSAWG] [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1271817] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh (ipfix)

2023-05-16 Thread Thomas.Graf
Dear Paul, Thank you very much. I merged all your input. PA> 5.4. srhActiveSegmentIPv6 / Additional Information, Changed from RFC8754 to RFC8402, is that correct? Please say which section of the RFC is relevant. TG> That is correct. The active section is specified in Section 2 of RFC 8402 and

Re: [OPSAWG] [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1271817] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh (ipfix)

2023-05-16 Thread Aitken, Paul
Thomas, 3. srhSegmentIPv6BasicList "As specified in Section 2 of [RFC8754]" versus 5.5 / Description, "As described in Section 2 of [RFC8754]". 3. srhSegmentIPv6ListSection Remove "Exposes" for consistency with 5.6 / Description. 3. srhSegmentsIPv6Left "Segment List from th

Re: [OPSAWG] [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1271817] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh (ipfix)

2023-05-16 Thread Thomas.Graf
Dear Paul, Thanks a lot. I updated section 5.9.1 as you suggested. https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh/main/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-09.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/d

Re: [OPSAWG] [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1271817] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh (ipfix)

2023-05-16 Thread Aitken, Paul
Thanks Thomas, I will re-review the updated draft later. PA> 7. Implementation Status, I would put this section in an appendix to avoid the need to renumber sections 8, 9, and 10 when this is removed. TG> Good point. I double checked. I am following Section 2 of RFC 7942 (https://datatracker.ie

Re: [OPSAWG] [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1271817] expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh (ipfix)

2023-05-16 Thread Thomas.Graf
Dear Paul, Thanks a lot for your review and comments. With one minor editorial exception, all are valid and merged in the coming -10 version of the document. https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/network-analytics/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh/main/draft-