Hi Thomas,
thank you for the feedback and proposed update. Please find my notes below
tagged by GIM2>>.
Regards,
Greg
On Fri, Aug 18, 2023 at 6:56 AM wrote:
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> Thanks a lot for addressing my comments.
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> GIM> It could be easier to take out "flow" altogether. WDYT?
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Dear Greg,
Thanks a lot for addressing my comments.
GIM> It could be easier to take out "flow" altogether. WDYT?
TG> Let me propose something else:
Change from
"When analyzing the availability metrics of a service flow between two nodes"
To
"When analyzing the availability metrics of a
