Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you very much for the detailed review. There are some points that are common to the udp spec. Will discuss those in separate threads. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : tsvwg De la part de Aitken, Paul Envoyé : vendredi 19 janvier 2024 10:52 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ;

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you for the careful review and good suggestions. Went with almost all of them. Please see inline for more context. Cheers, Med De : ipv6 De la part de Aitken, Paul Envoyé : lundi 22 janvier 2024 22:50 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : t...@ietf.org;

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-22 Thread Aitken, Paul
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes Abstract The updates are also meant to bringing some consistency among the entries of the registry. Typo, "meant to bring in". 1. Introduction As the OPSAWG is currently considering This will soon become

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-22 Thread Aitken, Paul
Med, The IE specified in Section 4.1 uses the new abstract data type defined in [I-D.ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh]. The unsigned256 type? It makes more sense to introduce a bitfield type. [Med] I think the use of unsigned256 is consistent with the current use in IP Flow Information Export

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-22 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thanks for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : ipv6 De la part de Aitken, Paul Envoyé : vendredi 19 janvier 2024 11:58 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : t...@ietf.org; ts...@ietf.org; 6...@ietf.org; ip...@ietf.org Objet : Re: [IPv6] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-19 Thread Aitken, Paul
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-06.txt 1. Introduction A brief overview of UDP option is provided in Section 3. Typo, "UDP options" (plural). The IE specified in Section 4.1 uses the new abstract data type defined in

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-19 Thread Aitken, Paul
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh Essentially the middle of this document is missing: a summary of issues is given and new IEs are proposed as a solution. But the issues are not developed or explained. 1.1. Issues with ipv6ExtensionHeaders Information