rg; 'opsawg-chairs'
> Subject: RE: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07 [2]
>
> Hi Rob,
>
> Thank you very much for your second review! We have made all the
> modifications you pointed out.
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf/09/
> Please help to move i
: Tuesday, October 12, 2021 2:08 PM
To: Haoyu Song ; draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org
Cc: opsawg@ietf.org; 'opsawg-chairs'
Subject: RE: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07 [2]
Hi Haoyu,
Thanks for applying the markups.
I've given -08 another read through, and I think that there are still some
e result of composing the properties offered by these main classes.
Warning: Use a comma before 'but' if it connects two independent clauses
(unless they are closely connected and short).
Suggested change: "system, but"
Thanks,
Rob
> -----Original Message-
> From: Haoyu Song
>
c: opsawg@ietf.org; 'opsawg-chairs'
> Subject: RE: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07 [2]
>
> Hi Rob,
>
> We have updated the draft according to your review suggestions and
> uploaded the -08 version. In the new revision we believe all your
> suggestions/questions have been ad
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-Original Message-
From: Haoyu Song
Sent: Wednesday, October 6, 2021 9:14 AM
To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) ; draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org
Cc: opsawg@ietf.org
Subject: RE: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07 [2]
Hi Rob,
Thank you very much for the review! We'll update
-ntf-07 [2]
Hi,
Here is my belated AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07.txt. [Text file with
comments attached in case this also gets truncated.]
I would like to thank you for the effort that you have put into this document,
and apologise for my long delay in reviewing it.
Broadly, I
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Regards,
Rob
-Original Message-
From: Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Sent: 06 October 2021 11:48
To: draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org
Cc: opsawg@ietf.org
Subject: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07 [2]
Hi,
Here is my belated AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07.txt. [Text
Sorry, the IETF mail filters have truncated my email. I'll resend as HTML to
see if that helps.
Rob
-Original Message-
From: Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Sent: 06 October 2021 11:35
To: draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org
Cc: opsawg@ietf.org
Subject: AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07
Hi
Hi,
Here is my belated AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-07.txt.
I would like to thank you for the effort that you have put into this document,
and apologise for my long delay in reviewing it.
Broadly, I think that this is a good and useful framework, but in some of the
latter parts
