Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-26 Thread Thomas.Graf
gt; > IMO, it seems standard track is a suitable type for this draft . > > Cheers, > Tianran > > From: OPSAWG [mailto:opsawg-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of > mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> > Sent: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 11:47

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-24 Thread tom petch
k, > which is similar to draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type, for > IPFIX IE. > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc8549/ > [Med] This is document is not similar as it includes many normative > statements. > > IMO, it seems standard track is a suitable type for this draft

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-24 Thread mohamed.boucadair
tatements. > > IMO, it seems standard track is a suitable type for this draft . > > Cheers, > Tianran > > From: OPSAWG [mailto:opsawg-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of > mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> > Sent: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 1

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-24 Thread tom petch
Cc: opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Subject: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type Hi Thomas, all, I made a shepherd review of the document. The review can be found at: ยท pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/dra

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-24 Thread Thomas.Graf
; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg-cha...@ietf.org> Cc : opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type Hi Thomas, Thank you for promptly addressing the comments. Looks good to me, but idnits is still not

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-24 Thread mohamed.boucadair
ix-mpls-sr-label-t...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-t...@ietf.org>; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg-cha...@ietf.org> Cc: opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Subject: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type Hi Thomas,

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread Tianran Zhou
On Behalf Of mohamed.boucad...@orange.com<mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Sent: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 11:47 PM To: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-t...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-t...@ietf.org>; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg-cha.

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Thomas, Thank you for promptly addressing the comments. Looks good to me, but idnits is still not happy with these long lines of Table 1: == ** There are 12 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one being 2 characters in excess of 72. == One very very minor nit: O

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread mohamed.boucadair
: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 11:47 PM To: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-t...@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-t...@ietf.org>; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg-cha...@ietf.org> Cc: opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Subject: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of dra

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread Thomas.Graf
Hi Med, Many thanks for the shepherd review. I updated the document accordingly into -03 version. https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type-03 I included all your suggestions and followed your example in using abbreviations and changed the term "MPLS Segment

Re: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread Tianran Zhou
M To: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-t...@ietf.org; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org Cc: opsawg@ietf.org Subject: [OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type Hi Thomas, all, I made a shepherd review of the document. The review can be found at: * pdf: https://github.com/

[OPSAWG] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-mpls-sr-label-type

2021-06-23 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Thomas, all, I made a shepherd review of the document. The review can be found at: * pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06-rev%20Med.pdf * doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-drip-re