Re: [OPSAWG] Comments on draft-song-opsawg-ifit-framework-09

2019-12-10 Thread Haoyu Song
To: draft-song-opsawg-ifit-framework.auth...@ietf.org Cc: opsawg@ietf.org Subject: Comments on draft-song-opsawg-ifit-framework-09 Hi Haoyu, Draft Authors, after reading draft-song-ifit-framework-09, whose adoption I support, FWIW I have a few comments that I think should be addressed in future

[OPSAWG] Comments on draft-song-opsawg-ifit-framework-09

2019-12-10 Thread Alexander L Clemm
Hi Haoyu, Draft Authors, after reading draft-song-ifit-framework-09, whose adoption I support, FWIW I have a few comments that I think should be addressed in future revisions of the draft: Section 1, 2nd paragraph: line of argumentation why "radical rethinking of existing methods" needs to