[OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-04

2018-02-09 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Not Ready This is an early gen-art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-04. The document is clear about what it is trying to do, and readable. It is not clear about how it expects this to actually work. However, I find the underlying concept confusing. 1

[OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-06

2018-04-13 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Not Ready This is both a gen-art re-review and a routing directorate requested review. The revisions from draft-04 to -06 show some improvement. However, I still have serious problems with this work. The primary problem is that this seems to violate

[OPSAWG] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-11

2018-11-29 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07

2018-09-14 Thread Joel Halpern
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-11

2023-02-15 Thread Joel Halpern
cell kvau...@trevilon.com www.trevilon.com <http://www.trevilon.com/> On Feb 9, 2023, at 6:56 PM, Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF

Re: [OPSAWG] Andrew Alston's Discuss on draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-13: (with DISCUSS)

2023-05-25 Thread Joel Halpern
I would add that the text about processing such things seems to me to be the typical (and appropriate) use of the Postel Principle, from which we can tell that the important part is the rule earlier in the text that says that EHs occur once each, except for destination options which may occur

Re: [OPSAWG] Fwd: [mpls] New Liaison Statement, "LS on the consent of draft Recommendation ITU-T Q.3962 (ex. Q.joint_tr) Requirements and Reference Model for optimized traceroute of joint Internet Pro

2024-02-21 Thread Joel Halpern
I checked with the IETF's liaison manager for ITU-T.  It turns out, process-wise, that the underlying document this refers to was fully approved by ITU-T  in December.  So there is nothing to respond to and no benefit for the IETF in generating a response. Yours, Joel On 2/17/2024 12:13 AM,

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-04

2018-02-28 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
nd what behavior is expected of the router (not just "the same > as that over there.") > Yours, > Joel > On 2/11/18 1:32 AM, Dongjie (Jimmy) wrote: >  > Hi Joel, >  > >  > Thanks for your review com

[OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09

2021-07-30 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments

[OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-11

2023-02-09 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more