[OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-service-model-explained-03

2017-09-20 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08

2017-08-30 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Almost Ready This is an exciting concept, and the draft overall is approachable. I have identified a few areas I think need more detail, and have a longish list of nits (please don't take that to be negative). ==Issues== I find the structure

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08

2017-09-07 Thread Robert Sparks
Apologies for being a little laggy - Some comments inline. On 8/31/17 2:07 PM, Eliot Lear wrote: Robert, As I wrote earlier, this was a great review.  Thanks for that. Please see below. On 8/30/17 7:21 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Almost Ready

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-20

2018-04-10 Thread Robert Sparks
On 4/10/18 5:43 AM, Eliot Lear wrote: Hi Robert and thanks again for the review.  Please see below for responses.  These are my personal views.  The WG chairs / shepherds may have different opinions. Thank you for the very quick response! On 09.04.18 19:57, Robert Sparks wrote

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-20

2018-04-11 Thread Robert Sparks
On 4/11/18 1:35 AM, Eliot Lear wrote: Hi Robert, A few additional comments below: On 10.04.18 16:22, Robert Sparks wrote: On 4/10/18 5:43 AM, Eliot Lear wrote: Hi Robert and thanks again for the review.  Please see below for responses.  These are my personal views.  The WG chairs

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-20

2018-04-11 Thread Robert Sparks
On 4/11/18 11:58 AM, Eliot Lear wrote: All the way down... On 11.04.18 18:15, Robert Sparks wrote: Similarly, the use of the word standardized naked like that is probably unhelpful. Can I infer you plan to edit it out or dress it more? Yes. One could imagine, for instance, Fairhair

[OPSAWG] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-20

2018-04-09 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
On 2/20/23 12:42 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: Hi Robert, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med -Message d'origine- De : Robert Sparks via Datatracker Envoyé : vendredi 17 février 2023 21:30 À : gen-...@ietf.org Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
<https://www.iana.org/go/draft-ietf-add-dnr-13>] So both of these options are created by that particular draft which is becoming an RFC. See https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-add-dnr/13/ - Bernie On Feb 21, 2023, at 9:49 AM, Robert Sparks wrote:  On 2/20/23 12:42 AM, mo

Re: [OPSAWG] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
can be seen at: https://tinyurl.com/opsawg-add-latest. This may be tweaked a little bit for better readability. Cheers, Med -Message d'origine- De : last-call De la part de Robert Sparks Envoyé : mardi 21 février 2023 15:49 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; gen-...@ietf.org Cc : draft

[OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-17 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments