Re: [OPSAWG] editorial notes on draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-17

Thank you, Ben. These are helpful and actionable comments. If I had time before the telechat, I would update. We’ll include these just after the telechat. Best, Kathleen Sent from my mobile device > On Feb 6, 2018, at 6:36 PM, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > > A few things that

[OPSAWG] editorial notes on draft-mm-wg-effect-encrypt-17

A few things that earned a red pen while I was reading. Sadly, I did not have time to correlate with other reviews, so probably some of these were already caught. Abstract: "recognized that making networks unmanageable" (add "that") comma --> semicolon after outcome Section 1.1, first