Hi, Sheng: Thanks for your review. I have updated the draft to address your concerns/comments, and will upload it together with other reviews.
Aijun Wang -----邮件原件----- 发件人: forwardingalgori...@ietf.org [mailto:forwardingalgori...@ietf.org] 代表 Sheng Jiang via Datatracker 发送时间: 2024年1月30日 22:56 收件人: ops-...@ietf.org 抄送: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip....@ietf.org; pce@ietf.org 主题: [Pce] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29 Reviewer: Sheng Jiang Review result: Has Nits I have reviewed this document as part of the OPS directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29 Reviewer: Sheng Jiang Review Date: 2024-01-30 Result: Has Nits This Standards Track document defines the Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP) extension for Central Control Dynamic Routing (CCDR) based applications in Native IP networks. 114: requireHs --> requires 127: nexthops --> next hops 464: lead --> leads 618: nexthop --> next hop 702: soley --> solely 845: multihop --> multi-hop There are many places that the "s" after the third person singular verbs are missing. _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
