Hi, Hari, Thank you for the very detailed comments, we updated the draft to -07 and addressed them, together with a few other editorial changes.
Best wishes, Haomian 发件人: Hariharan Ananthakrishnan [mailto:h...@netflix.com] 发送时间: 2022年5月9日 9:04 收件人: younglee...@gmail.com; Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com>; daniele.ceccare...@ericsson.com 抄送: pce@ietf.org 主题: Shepherd's Review of draft-ietf-pce-vn-association Hi Authors, Thank you for your work on this document. I have completed my Shepherd's review. Minor: The document mixes VN and customer in many places. In the introduction we make it clear that "A VN is a customer view of the TE network", that should set the context. I would suggest removing the mixed use of VN and customer. 1. Introduction s/ Virtual Network (VN) (or customer) / Virtual Network (VN)/ 3. Operation Overview s/belonging to a VN\/customer/belonging to a VN/ s/to the same VN or customer/to the same VN/ Nits: Title: s/Path Computation Element communication Protocol/Path Computation Element Communication Protocol/ s/Establishing Relationships/establishing relationships/ s/Label Switching Paths/Label Switched Paths/ Abstract: s/Label Switching Paths/Label Switched Paths/ s/virtual network (VN)/Virtual Network (VN)/ 1. Introduction: s/Path Computation Element communication Protocol/Path Computation Element Communication Protocol/ s/Path Computation Clients '(PCCs)/Path Computation Clients (PCCs)/ s/Label Switching Paths (LSPs)/Label Switched Paths (LSPs)/ 3. Operation Overview s/VN Association Type in an Operator-Configured/VN Association Type (TBD1) in an Operator-Configured/ 4. Extensions to PCEP s/The Virtual Netowrk Identifier/The Virtual Network Identifier/ Thanks, Hari
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