Re: [Pce] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pce-wson-routing-wavelength-12.txt

2014-08-01 Thread Julien Meuric
Hi Young. Thank you for the update. I think I can live with the Re-optimize phrase as it is. Just a few remaining nits: - still some double spacing - s/PCE-based Architecture/PCE-based architecture/ - s/network.The PCE/network. The PCE/ - s/constraining the path to have/constraining the paths

Re: [Pce] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pce-wson-routing-wavelength-12.txt

2014-08-01 Thread Leeyoung
Hi Julien, Thanks for your quick review on the update. I made all the changes you indicated below as well as the double spacing for a few places. I will publish in a minute v.13. Thanks, Young -Original Message- From: Julien Meuric [mailto:julien.meu...@orange.com] Sent: Friday,

Re: [Pce] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pce-wson-routing-wavelength-12.txt

2014-07-31 Thread Julien Meuric
Hi Young and WSON co-authors. As part of the shepherding of the WSON requirement draft, please find below some comments to address before sending to the IESG. Regards, Julien -- Globally, the way the top-level section titles are indented creates troubles to IETF tools, including

Re: [Pce] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pce-wson-routing-wavelength-12.txt

2014-05-22 Thread Leeyoung
Hi Julien, Let me know if there are any more remaining issues before closing WG LC for this draft. Thanks, Young From: Cyril Margaria [mailto:cyril.marga...@gmail.com] Sent: Monday, April 28, 2014 11:58 AM To: Leeyoung Cc: Julien Meuric; pce@ietf.org Subject: Re: FW: [Pce] I-D Action:

[Pce] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pce-wson-routing-wavelength-12.txt

2014-04-28 Thread Leeyoung
Hi Julien, This update reflects all the comments received from Cyril and Ramon as part of the WG LC. Cyril, please let the WG know if this update satisfies your comment. Best Regards, Young -Original Message- From: Pce [mailto:pce-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of

Re: [Pce] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pce-wson-routing-wavelength-12.txt

2014-04-28 Thread Cyril Margaria
Hi Young, This update reflects all my comments, I am OK with this version. Best Regards, Cyril. On 28 April 2014 12:31, Leeyoung leeyo...@huawei.com wrote: Hi Julien, This update reflects all the comments received from Cyril and Ramon as part of the WG LC. Cyril, please let the WG know