Author: larry
Date: Fri Jun  8 11:13:55 2007
New Revision: 14417

Modified:
   doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod

Log:
should proofread before checkin, not after...


Modified: doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod
==============================================================================
--- doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod        (original)
+++ doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod        Fri Jun  8 11:13:55 2007
@@ -1676,8 +1676,8 @@
 =item *
 
 For an ordinary Perl program running by itself, the C<GLOBAL> and
-C<PROCESS> namespaces are considered synonymous.  However, it certain
-situations (such as shared hosting under a webserver), the actually
+C<PROCESS> namespaces are considered synonymous.  However, in certain
+situations (such as shared hosting under a webserver), the actual
 process may contain multiple virtual processes, each running its own
 "main" code.  In this case, the C<GLOBAL> namespace holds variables
 that properly belong to the individual virtual process, while the
@@ -1689,11 +1689,11 @@
 mutability of process variables as seen by the individual subprocesses.
 Also, individual subprocesses may not create new process variables.
 If the process wishes to grant subprocesses the ability to communicate
-via the C<process> namespace, it must supply a writeable hash or some
-such to all the subprocesses granted that privilege.
+via the C<PROCESS> namespace, it must supply a writeable variable
+to all the subprocesses granted that privilege.
 
-When these namespaces are distinguished, the C<*> shortcut always refers
-to C<GLOBAL>.  There is no twigil shortcut for C<PROCESS::>.
+When these namespaces are so distinguished, the C<*> shortcut always refers
+to C<GLOBAL>.  There is no twigil shortcut for C<PROCESS>.
 
 =item *
 

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