On Tue, 3 Feb 2009 16:07:25 +0100 Ana Guerrero <a...@debian.org> wrote: > >Hi, > >For updating the release notes for Lenny [0], what about: > > > >There are not huge changes in the KDE Desktop Enviroment from the version >shipped in Etch. Lenny ships an updated translation and service release of KDE >3.5 that is a mixture between 3.5.9 and 3.5.10. Modules labeled as version >3.5.9 are updated and they include mostly the same than the tenth revision. >In overall, Lenny ships 3.5.10 without the kicker improvements shipped in >kdebase and some bug fixes in kdepim. >Lenny will be the latest stable release including a KDE 3 series environment. > > >Any comments? >Proofreading for english natives is totally welcome :D >
I think you want the last sentence to be "Lenny will be the last stable release including a KDE 3 series environment." Also, I think "Modules labeled as version 3.5.9 are updated and they include mostly the same than the tenth revision." is clearer as "Some modules are labeled as version 3.5.9, but have been updated and include most of the same changes found in 3.5.10.". Scott K _______________________________________________ pkg-kde-extras mailing list pkg-kde-extras@lists.alioth.debian.org http://lists.alioth.debian.org/mailman/listinfo/pkg-kde-extras
