Re: A script/voiceover text for Plasma 5.8 video

2016-09-19 Thread Ivan Čukić
Mostly ok, I've made a few alterations.

One sentence I don't get is:

> Global shortcuts configuration has been simplified and can now be
> configured to jump to specific tasks within an application.

Cheers,
Ivan


Re: A script/voiceover text for Plasma 5.8 video

2016-09-19 Thread Marco Martin
On Saturday 17 September 2016, Łukasz Sawicki wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Here is a  script/voiceover text for Plasma 5.8 video. Please check
> grammar, typos etc. It is heavily based on Plasma 5.8 beta
> announcement.
> 
> https://notes.kde.org/p/Plasma_5.8_script

looks good to me, tough it would be good if some native speaker proofreads it


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Marco Martin