Re: [Widgets] - Requirements Working Draft 23 June 2008 Review

2008-09-03 Thread SUZANNE Benoit RD-SIRP-ISS
I agree with you comments, and I¹ve just added a feedback to the R27
discussion

 
 Benoit  Suzanne
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On Thu, Jul 31, 2008 at 6:00 AM, Marcos Caceres
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 Hi Benoit,
 Thank you for taking the time to prepare a detailed review. I think I
 was able to address all your comments, except for the one about R27.
 Widget State Change Events.  It would be great if you could help
 clarify what you want me to do there. Please see below for detailed
 description of the changes I made.

 Please let me know if you are satisfied with the responses I've have
 given below or if you would like any further clarification.

 On Wed, Jul 30, 2008 at 8:52 AM, SUZANNE Benoit RD-SIRP-ISS
 [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 Marcos,
 Here are my comments on the Requirements (W3C Working Draft 23 June 2008)


 1. Introduction
 [...] This document does not address the requirements of web widgets,
 such as iGoogle Gadgets or Windows Live Gadgets.
 I Think we can add a wording at the end of the sentense to read: ...,
 although this version of the widget specification, the Working group will
 address the web widget in the next iteration of the widgets specifications.

 Although I personally agree, I don't think we have reached a
 resolution as a working group about what features should be included
 in future versions of the Widgets specification. I don't want to
 prematurely commit us to feature which we may not end up implementing
 in the future. If anything, this should go into a Widgets 2.0
 Requirements document. It might be good to prepare such a document
 once this one reaches CR.

 3. Design Goals
 Longevity: ...
 I think in this chapter we should talk about the versioning of a widget. I'm
 not sure it should be presented as a specific item, or if it can be added
 inside the logevity section in relation to the longevity of the content
 provided and related updates it will need over time.

 I see what you are saying, but I think mentioning versioning is better
 served in the Web and offline distribution section. I've added the
 following text:

  A conforming specification needs to deal with cases where an
 end-user acquires a widget resource over HTTP or via some other non
 HTTP-based (offline) means, such as a local file system, Bluetooth or
 a Multimedia Message Service. In addition, a conforming specification
 needs to provide a means by which widgets can be updated when a new or
 different version of a widget becomes available. It must be possible
 to perform updates from either an online or offline source. 

 R7. Internationalization Guidelines
 Rationale: [...] (e.g. 'resources/en/' for all English content,
 'resources/en-au/' for further localized Australian-English content, and so
 on).
 Insert an and in between the 2 english example to stress the need to allow
 both

 Done.

R15  R16
 Is there a reason why they should not be must instead of should?

 I've changed R15 to a must, as we have already spec'd the license
 element. We are still undecided about rendering dimensions (R16).

 R19. Iconic Representations
 Rationale: [...] For example, an a small graphic of a calendar may
 represent a calendar widget.
 an a should be corrected

 Fixed.

 But I propose to add the following after: And a small graphic of today's
 calendar page may also represent this same calendar widget

 I changed the text to read: For example, a small graphic of a
 calendar showing today's date may represent a calendar widget. This
 is to incorporate your suggested text and to imply that the graphic
 may change dynamically (in accordance with R34 - Icon API).

 R27. Widget State Change Events
 This requirement must be available both ways, you should be able to capture
 the change of state when it happens, but you should also be able as an
 author to force the state change as well. I propose the following text:
 A conforming specification must also allow the author to programmatically
 change the state of the widget to allow a change in the view of the
 instantiated widget.

 I'm not sure this is the right place for this. I think this should be
 in R24. Instantiated Widget API. However, I'm not sure that the
 proposed text covers the actual requirement. I wanted to put something
 like you suggested into R24: The API SHOULD also also allow authors
 to programmatically change the visual state of a widget, but I'm not
 sure what that means. Can you please provide an example or a use case?

I agree that this technically, allowing a dev to change the widget state,
falls under R24. But I wonder if this specific functionality should be
stated.


 R28. Network State Change Events
 In the specific case of a network drop, the author will need to know when
 the network works again, in order to not have to code a checking loop, it is
 important to put together a mechanism whereby it's the widget engine that
 wakes 

Re: [Widgets] - Requirements Working Draft 23 June 2008 Review

2008-07-30 Thread Marcos Caceres

Hi Benoit,
Thank you for taking the time to prepare a detailed review. I think I
was able to address all your comments, except for the one about R27.
Widget State Change Events.  It would be great if you could help
clarify what you want me to do there. Please see below for detailed
description of the changes I made.

Please let me know if you are satisfied with the responses I've have
given below or if you would like any further clarification.

On Wed, Jul 30, 2008 at 8:52 AM, SUZANNE Benoit RD-SIRP-ISS
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 Marcos,
 Here are my comments on the Requirements (W3C Working Draft 23 June 2008)


 1. Introduction
 [...] This document does not address the requirements of web widgets,
 such as iGoogle Gadgets or Windows Live Gadgets.
 I Think we can add a wording at the end of the sentense to read: ...,
 although this version of the widget specification, the Working group will
 address the web widget in the next iteration of the widgets specifications.

Although I personally agree, I don't think we have reached a
resolution as a working group about what features should be included
in future versions of the Widgets specification. I don't want to
prematurely commit us to feature which we may not end up implementing
in the future. If anything, this should go into a Widgets 2.0
Requirements document. It might be good to prepare such a document
once this one reaches CR.

 3. Design Goals
 Longevity: ...
 I think in this chapter we should talk about the versioning of a widget. I'm
 not sure it should be presented as a specific item, or if it can be added
 inside the logevity section in relation to the longevity of the content
 provided and related updates it will need over time.

I see what you are saying, but I think mentioning versioning is better
served in the Web and offline distribution section. I've added the
following text:

  A conforming specification needs to deal with cases where an
end-user acquires a widget resource over HTTP or via some other non
HTTP-based (offline) means, such as a local file system, Bluetooth or
a Multimedia Message Service. In addition, a conforming specification
needs to provide a means by which widgets can be updated when a new or
different version of a widget becomes available. It must be possible
to perform updates from either an online or offline source. 

 R7. Internationalization Guidelines
 Rationale: [...] (e.g. 'resources/en/' for all English content,
 'resources/en-au/' for further localized Australian-English content, and so
 on).
 Insert an and in between the 2 english example to stress the need to allow
 both

Done.

R15  R16
 Is there a reason why they should not be must instead of should?

I've changed R15 to a must, as we have already spec'd the license
element. We are still undecided about rendering dimensions (R16).

 R19. Iconic Representations
 Rationale: [...] For example, an a small graphic of a calendar may
 represent a calendar widget.
 an a should be corrected

Fixed.

 But I propose to add the following after: And a small graphic of today's
 calendar page may also represent this same calendar widget

I changed the text to read: For example, a small graphic of a
calendar showing today's date may represent a calendar widget. This
is to incorporate your suggested text and to imply that the graphic
may change dynamically (in accordance with R34 - Icon API).

 R27. Widget State Change Events
 This requirement must be available both ways, you should be able to capture
 the change of state when it happens, but you should also be able as an
 author to force the state change as well. I propose the following text:
 A conforming specification must also allow the author to programmatically
 change the state of the widget to allow a change in the view of the
 instantiated widget.

I'm not sure this is the right place for this. I think this should be
in R24. Instantiated Widget API. However, I'm not sure that the
proposed text covers the actual requirement. I wanted to put something
like you suggested into R24: The API SHOULD also also allow authors
to programmatically change the visual state of a widget, but I'm not
sure what that means. Can you please provide an example or a use case?

 R28. Network State Change Events
 In the specific case of a network drop, the author will need to know when
 the network works again, in order to not have to code a checking loop, it is
 important to put together a mechanism whereby it's the widget engine that
 wakes up the widget when the network is back on.
 What do you think?

Agreed. Does the way the requirement has been rewritten in regards to
events address the looping issue?:

A conforming specification MUST specify a means that allows authors
to check if the widget resource is connected to the network. A
conforming specification MUST define the scope of the term network
and MUST specify a means by which connection and disconnection events
can be captured by an author through script. A conforming

[Widgets] - Requirements Working Draft 23 June 2008 Review

2008-07-29 Thread SUZANNE Benoit RD-SIRP-ISS
Marcos,
Here are my comments on the Requirements (W3C Working Draft 23 June 2008)


 1. Introduction
 [...] This document does not address the requirements of web widgets, such
as iGoogle Gadgets or Windows Live Gadgets.
I Think we can add a wording at the end of the sentense to read: ³...,
although this version of the widget specification, the Working group will
address the web widget in the next iteration of the widgets specifications.²

 3. Design Goals
 Longevity: ...
I think in this chapter we should talk about the versioning of a widget. I¹m
not sure it should be presented as a specific item, or if it can be added
inside the logevity section in relation to the longevity of the content
provided and related updates it will need over time.

 R7. Internationalization Guidelines
 Rationale: [...] (e.g. 'resources/en/' for all English content,
'resources/en-au/' for further localized Australian-English content, and so on).
Insert an ³and² in between the 2 english example to stress the need to allow
both

R15  R16
Is there a reason why they should not be ³must² instead of ³should²?

 R19. Iconic Representations
 Rationale: [...] For example, an a small graphic of a calendar may represent a
calendar widget.
³an a² should be corrected
But I propose to add the following after: ³And a small graphic of today¹s
calendar page may also represent this same calendar widget²

 R27. Widget State Change Events
This requirement must be available both ways, you should be able to capture
the change of state when it happens, but you should also be able as an
author to force the state change as well. I propose the following text:
³A conforming specification must also allow the author to programmatically
change the state of the widget to allow a change in the view of the
instantiated widget.²

 R28. Network State Change Events
In the specific case of a network drop, the author will need to know when
the network works again, in order to not have to code a checking loop, it is
important to put together a mechanisme whereby it¹s the widget engine that
wakes up the widget when the network is back on.
What do you think?

 R29. Modal Priority
 [...] (or any of its windows) should to categorize itself
³should to...² should be corrected

 4.5 User Agents
 R39. End-user Declared Proxy
 A conforming specification should recommend that widget user agents allow
end-users to explicitly input a proxy server through which all HTTP-based
request are made.
This requirement should include at the end ³, or in case of availability,
that the system wide proxy is used.²
This requirement should be a ³Must²

R40. Automatic Updates
This requirement should be a ³Must²

R41. Persistent Storage of Preferences
   A conforming specification must recommend that a widget user agent implement
a means to persistently store user preferences for each instantiated widget.
The following should be added after the first sentence: ³This Storage
mechanism must allow to keep the preferences after restart of the widget or
on the restart of the user agent.

 Rationale: To allow widgets to be closed and re-instantiated without the
end-user having reset the preferences for an instantiated widget. For example,
when using a weather widget, the end-user will want to store the preferred
location for weather information, and not be asked to input that information
again every time the widget is re-instantiated.
And again at the end of this sentence: ³The same would apply if the user has
setup 2 instances of the same widget and would like to view 2 different
cities. After closing the widgets, open 2 instances of this weather widget
would automatically pick up the 2 pre-set cities.

 R41 and R42
I would switch them arround so that the notion of the multiple instance can
be used in the Preference Storage Requirement.

 R44. Runtime Security Exceptions
A conforming specification must specify runtime exceptions for when the API
attempts to perform an action it it not authorized to perform.
Correct ³it it²


Best Regards, Benoit


 
 Benoit  Suzanne
 Widget Factory Project Manager - Orange Labs - FT/RD/SIRP/SOL/SLAM
 t. +33 (0)145 298  198 - m. +33 (0)680 287 553
 [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 
 



 
 Benoit  Suzanne
 Widget Factory Project Manager - Orange Labs - FT/RD/SIRP/SOL/SLAM
 t. +33 (0)145 298  198 - m. +33 (0)680 287 553
 [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 
 


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