Wolfgang, a v2 for this would be appreciated, in case Aaron's review mail got a
bit
buried at your side.
On 11/22/19 3:52 PM, Aaron Lauterer wrote:
> Some hints from my side inline.
>
> Rephrasing some passages trying to make it easier to read and understand.
>
> Did some sentence splitting an
Some hints from my side inline.
Rephrasing some passages trying to make it easier to read and understand.
Did some sentence splitting an smaller corrections as well.
Please check if the rephrased sections are still correct from a
technical POV.
On 11/15/19 9:51 AM, Wolfgang Link wrote:
Imp
Improvement of grammar and punctuation.
Clarify the HA limitations.
Remove future tense in some sentences.
It is not good to use it in technical/scientific papers.
Rewrite some sentences to improve understanding.
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