RE: Need your help to make sure the draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement readability is good.

2023-08-22 Thread Linda Dunbar
Joel, I see your points. Please see my explanation below quoted by . From: Joel Halpern Sent: Monday, August 21, 2023 11:34 PM To: Linda Dunbar Cc: rtgwg-chairs ; draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement@ietf.org; rtgwg@ietf.org Subject: Re: Need your help to make sure the

Re: Need your help to make sure the draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement readability is good.

2023-08-22 Thread Joel Halpern
I think I now understand your point.  As a problem statement draft, I would replace the detailed description of the specific proposal with a more generic "There are proposals to enhance BGP advertisements to address this problem." Yours, Joel On 8/22/2023 6:34 PM, Linda Dunbar wrote: Joel,

RE: Need your help to make sure the draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement readability is good.

2023-08-22 Thread Linda Dunbar
Joel, Thank you very much for your suggestion. We will take your suggested wording into the document: “When a site failure occurs, many instances can be impacted. When the impacted instances’ IP prefixes in a Cloud DC are not aggregated nicely, which is very common, one single site failure

Re: Need your help to make sure the draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement readability is good.

2023-08-22 Thread Joel Halpern
Thank you. Joel On 8/22/2023 11:40 PM, Linda Dunbar wrote: Joel, Thank you very much for your suggestion. We will take your suggested wording into the document: /“When a site failure occurs, many instances can be impacted. When the impacted instances’ IP prefixes in a Cloud DC are not