Re: Looking for some feedback...

2003-09-22 Thread FvE
Simon Cooke wrote: Hey guys, If you're bored, I was wondering if I might get some feedback from you. I'm trying to set up a film company these days (www.popcornfilms.com), and we're slowly putting together the funding etc. for our first short film. I was wondering if you guys might like to

Re: Looking for some feedback...

2003-09-22 Thread FvE
Another question Simon, your script appears to be about 50 minutes worth of screentime, that too short for a feature. Is this a tv-movie? Frans

Re: Looking for some feedback...

2003-09-22 Thread Simon Cooke
From: FvE [EMAIL PROTECTED] Not really critique, but more of a useful tip... Though I've learned to write screenplays the same way as you do, it is now considered NOT DONE to include instructions like CLOSE-UP or LONG SHOT or any other instructions for the DP or basically all other crew as

Re: Looking for some feedback...

2003-09-22 Thread Simon Cooke
From: FvE [EMAIL PROTECTED] Another question Simon, your script appears to be about 50 minutes worth of screentime, that too short for a feature. Is this a tv-movie? It's ... erm... how do you put it? A long short film. We've timed it at around 40 minutes. Apparently if it's less than an

Re: Looking for some feedback...

2003-09-22 Thread FvE
Producing it ourselves... I'm directing and a very good friend will be the DP. BTW: It's ok to use those instructions if it's for a good reason, but they should be used sparingly. Like any rule, the trick is to know when to break them ;-) Shooting on film or video?

Looking for some feedback...

2003-09-21 Thread Simon Cooke
Hey guys, If you're bored, I was wondering if I might get some feedback from you. I'm trying to set up a film company these days (www.popcornfilms.com), and we're slowly putting together the funding etc. for our first short film. I was wondering if you guys might like to critique the