Re: [Softwires] WGLC on draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-14 - 2 of 2

2018-04-22 Thread 傅瑜
Hi Ian, Please see my reply inline: Thanks for your comments Yu From: softwires-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:softwires-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of ianfar...@gmx.com Sent: Friday, April 06, 2018 10:59 PM To: Yong Cui; Softwires WG Subject: Re: [Softwires] WGLC on draft-ietf-softwire

Re: [Softwires] WGLC on draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-14 - 2 of 2

2018-04-06 Thread ianfarrer
Hi, Review part 2. Cheers, Ian - 4. Attributes 4.a) 'sub options' is used. Conventionally, this is hypenated as 'sub-options'. Please change throughout. 4.b) It would be more accurate to say: Different combinations of sub-options are required for each type of S46 Container... 4.c) "