Hi Ian,
Please see my reply inline:
Thanks for your comments
Yu
From: softwires-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:softwires-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf
Of ianfar...@gmx.com
Sent: Friday, April 06, 2018 10:59 PM
To: Yong Cui; Softwires WG
Subject: Re: [Softwires] WGLC on draft-ietf-softwire
Hi,
Review part 2.
Cheers,
Ian
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4. Attributes
4.a) 'sub options' is used. Conventionally, this is
hypenated as 'sub-options'. Please change throughout.
4.b) It would be more accurate to say:
Different combinations of sub-options are
required for each type of S46 Container...
4.c)
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