Hi,
Here’s my review of the draft. It’s rather long so I’ve had to submit it as two
emails. It’s based on -15.
Cheers,
Ian
Title
T.a)
RADIUS Attribute for Softwire Address plus Port based Mechanisms
To improve readability and as this defines 3 new RADIUS attributes,
'RADIUS Attributes
Hi,
Review part 2.
Cheers,
Ian
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4. Attributes
4.a) 'sub options' is used. Conventionally, this is
hypenated as 'sub-options'. Please change throughout.
4.b) It would be more accurate to say:
Different combinations of sub-options are
required for each type of S46 Container...
4.c)
"
Reviewer: Qin Wu
Review result: Ready
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that
