Author: gjb
Date: Tue Sep 20 18:02:16 2016
New Revision: 306045
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/306045

Log:
  Wording fixes and further clarifications.
  
  Submitted by: cperciva
  Approved by:  re (implicit)
  Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  releng/11.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: releng/11.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- releng/11.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml        Tue Sep 
20 17:53:33 2016        (r306044)
+++ releng/11.0/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml        Tue Sep 
20 18:02:16 2016        (r306045)
@@ -242,9 +242,9 @@
       <para revision="272166">The &man.primes.6; utility has been
        updated to correctly enumerate prime numbers between
        <literal>4295098369</literal> and
-       <literal>3825123056546413050</literal>, which prior to this
-       change, it would be possible for returned values to be
-       incorrectly identified as prime numbers.</para>
+       <literal>3825123056546413050</literal>.  Prior to this change,
+       it was possible for returned values to be incorrectly
+       identified as prime numbers.</para>
 
       <para revision="272198">The &man.mkimg.1; utility has been
        updated to include three options used to print information
@@ -709,7 +709,8 @@
       <para revision="273955">A new &man.rc.8; script,
        <filename>growfs</filename>, has been added, which will resize
        the root filesystem on boot if <filename>/firstboot</filename>
-       exists.</para>
+       exists and <literal>growfs_enable</literal> is enabled in
+       &man.rc.conf.5;.</para>
 
       <para revision="275299">The <filename>mrouted</filename>
        &man.rc.8; script has been removed from the base system.  An
@@ -1508,9 +1509,9 @@
        &man.hv.netvsc.4; driver has been updated to support checksum
        offloading and <acronym>TSO</acronym>.</para>
 
-      <para revision="286062">The &man.xen.4; driver has been updated
-       to include support for <literal>blkif</literal> indirect
-       segment I/O.</para>
+      <para revision="286062">The &man.xen.4; blkfront driver has been
+       updated to include support for <literal>blkif</literal>
+       indirect segment I/O.</para>
 
       <para revision="302288">Indirect segment I/O is enabled by
        default in the Xen blkfront driver when running on AWS
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