Re: [systemd-devel] [PATCH 2/2] man: Small grammar fix

2013-08-23 Thread Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
On Tue, Jul 23, 2013 at 09:41:45AM -0500, William Giokas wrote:
 '... or ... or ...' should be '..., ... or ...'
 ---
  man/systemctl.xml | 4 ++--
  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
 
 diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml
 index ee13a70..0a90202 100644
 --- a/man/systemctl.xml
 +++ b/man/systemctl.xml
 @@ -111,8 +111,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
 http://www.gnu.org/licenses/.
  termoption--state=/option/term
  
  listitem
 -paraThe argument should be a comma-separated list of unit LOAD
 -or SUB or ACTIVE states. When listing units, show only those
 +paraThe argument should be a comma-separated list of unit LOAD,
 +SUB or ACTIVE states. When listing units, show only those
  with specified LOAD or SUB or ACTIVE state./para
  /listitem
/varlistentry
Hm, this patch series slipped through the cracks completely. I pushed my own
patch based on this patch, because the whole paragraph was awkward and we use
the oxford comma, ie. word, word, and word.

I think the rest of the series has been merged after you resent it rebased.
I not, please holler.

Zbyszek
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[systemd-devel] [PATCH 2/2] man: Small grammar fix

2013-07-23 Thread William Giokas
'... or ... or ...' should be '..., ... or ...'
---
 man/systemctl.xml | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml
index ee13a70..0a90202 100644
--- a/man/systemctl.xml
+++ b/man/systemctl.xml
@@ -111,8 +111,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see 
http://www.gnu.org/licenses/.
 termoption--state=/option/term
 
 listitem
-paraThe argument should be a comma-separated list of unit LOAD
-or SUB or ACTIVE states. When listing units, show only those
+paraThe argument should be a comma-separated list of unit LOAD,
+SUB or ACTIVE states. When listing units, show only those
 with specified LOAD or SUB or ACTIVE state./para
 /listitem
   /varlistentry
-- 
1.8.3.2.1052.g3a6d627

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